A Virgin’s sorrow: a #Prosery #AmericanSentence #haibun

Virgin River, Zion National park

There are so many goodbyes.

I watched the last rains of the monsoon emerse themselves in me. The clouds that bore them dispersed in whispers of seasonal wind. It will be a year before new ones return.

Another family arrives. They galavant along my shores, take their photos, and then leave me, like all the others do. Sometimes the elk take their sips from me when the visitors are here. Most of the time, they come as the sun dips below the canyon walls.

I remember when the canyon was flat land. I said goodbye to each parcel of earth I carved as I ran. I still remember each of them. And yet, somewhere ahead lies the Colorado river. And so, somewhere ahead there are even more visitors. And goodbyes.

I dreamed I was the moon, and nothing else mattered until I woke up.

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20 responses to “A Virgin’s sorrow: a #Prosery #AmericanSentence #haibun”

  1. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    So lovely Frank. Inspired by your Arizona trip, yes?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Zion National Park, to be precise. Thank you, Linda! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Jade Li Avatar

    A spiritual, multi-layered tale of living water. Very nice.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Jade! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    You took us to the place where water meets other water, and eternity went on speed dial; a lovely perspective and message.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  4. sarahsouthwest Avatar

    What a great personification of the strength of the river. I love that final American sentence. Stunning.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  5. robtkistner Avatar

    This was a great perspective of a view of nature Frank – very engaging!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Rob! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  6. Victoria Stuart Avatar
    Victoria Stuart

    Truly wonderful, Frank, I loved the water carving and dreaming and dedicated to saying goodbyes.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Victoria! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. Margaret Elizabeth Bednar Avatar
    Margaret Elizabeth Bednar

    Welcoming and forbidding, this land, this river, Mother Nature. You paint her with a kind voice here.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  8. kim881 Avatar

    I like the way you began (and almost ended with goodbyes), Frank, and continued with the rain and the clouds that โ€˜bore them dispersed in whispers of seasonal windโ€™. The heart of your prosery is rooted in the personification of the river and I love that it dreamed it was the moon! Water and moon are so closely linked.

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  9. Dr. Crystal Grimes Avatar

    I like the idea of remembering each bit of earth carved. Beautifu!

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  10. Janice Avatar

    Beautifully expressive…I love that closing line.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Janice! Iโ€™m glad you liked it! ๐Ÿ˜€

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