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Dogpochi
A little anxious, thinking of the Shirakawa Barrier, thinking on it day by day; but calmed my mind by remembering the old poem, “somehow sending word home.” I walked through heavy green summer forests. Many a poet inscribed a few words at one of the Three Barriers–“Autumn Winds” and “Red Maple Leaves” come to mind. Then, like fields of snow, innumerable white-flowered bushes, unohana, covered either side of the road…
Unohana
around my head
dressed for ancient rites [Sora]
(note: Sora was a poet and traveling companion of Basho during his travels through the North.)
Basho, Narrow Road to the Interior, translated by Sam Hamil, The Essential Basho, pg. 9
Another misplaced dread
A dead certainty that I would face my first evaluation of the year arose this morning. I shuddered at the waves of anxiety that followed. The morning traffic, being what it was, jammed up in Yonkers. Every highway from my position held hordes of lit tail-lights. I muddled through local streets, convinced of my impending lateness, and dreading the disasterous observation that surely would come.
And didn’t. I once again enjoyed the authenticity of my fearing the worst in vain. It’s as though I relish living Mark Twain’s admonition: “I lived through so many terrible things in my life, most of which never happened.”
clear roads home
the suddenly
setting sun
for Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Authenticity (posted by Susan)
Categories: haikai, haiku community
Ah, we always expect he worst. I can feel the relief of the trip home!
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Thanks, Sherry! 😀
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I, too, feel the relief-captured beautifully in that haiku. I also know the anxiety of being evaluated (in the classroom). Everything that can go wrong does–or maybe we’re lucky.
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Indeed! Thanks, Susan! 😀
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Oh we get so upset and stressed about such inauthentic things. Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you, Rob! 😀
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Oh the anxiety of anticipation What a relief when our fears don’t become reality Nice
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Thanks! 😀
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I feel the thankfulness! A story easy to identify with, and then that beautiful haiku.
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Thank you, Rosemary! 😀
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