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Follow a Lone Crow: a Day 3 #NaPoWriMo/GloPoWriMo2020 solo #Renga

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gray sky

the back-and-forth swaying

of bare branches

a street suddenly empty

of pedestrians

a wrapped package

left out on the front stoop

trembling hands

heart racing just entering

the local supermarket

A descending crow in flight

no sign of its murder

so silent

within these closing-in walls

another Friday

A caught breath at every

curious throat tickle

Follow a lone crow

still no way away from

this pandemic time

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  1. Yes, an incredibly creative way to use “murder of crows.” I so understand…I touch my skin to make sure it’s cool and try to identify every cough.

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  2. Your poem evokes the eerie atmosphere of empty streets, Frank, and the wrapped package on the front stoop speaks volumes. I love how you’ve played with ‘murder of crows’ and the final lines are ominous.

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  3. Oh you’ve expressed so well the fears of us all in this time….suddenly worried at one cough or tickle of the throat in the morning….trembling hands as we must interact with a package or mail or a credit card at a grocery store. It is indeed a surreal time.

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