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3 responses to “#SilentSunday (8/23/20)”

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   Jordan Hoggard

   August 23, 2020

   A rest from Haiku
   To collect firewood at friend’s
   Fatigue high, till tomorrow.

   Enjoy the rest.
   P.s. question. My last line there… Never this happen before, though hmmmm…anything anywhere that precludes a comma mid-line in a Haiku? Interesting. That’s a question I’ve never before asked.

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   Jordan Hoggard

   August 23, 2020

   Formatting seemed jacked, so, to be sure: A rest from Haiku / To collect firewood at friend’s / Fatigue high, till tomorrow.

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   Marsha

   August 23, 2020

   Noon might have worked better than tomorrow.

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