Presence: A #Haibun (4/26/2021): Day 26 of #NationalPoetryMonth

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Fresh crabapple leaves flutter. The mantle clock tick-tocks, tick-tocks. Frank’s voice carries from beyond his closed door. I walk to the couch, grab a pillow, and return to my seat at the dining room table. The Syracuse windchimes sound off.

A roar soft as a sated lion: the new windchimes ring out. Branches sway like stadium fans performing “the wave,” as both sets harmonize. Clear sky, a deckrail aglow in reflected light, and yet these temepsts!

I ignored moments like these when I let the strife of dashed expectations overwhelm me. I brooded, with a clenched gut and knotted shoulders, over many disastrous tomorrows that never came. I regretted, with a lumped throat and sore heart, over many desolate yesterdays that weren’t.

Not today. Now, I savor these dull, arthritic aches, and the woosh of wind. I relish the ticking clock and muffled conversations from the office below. I delight in being startled by drooping dogwood blossoms, the neighbors’ blooming violets and overly thin golden retriever, the aftertaste of sweet potatoe tortilla chips.

Just this.

sudden warmth

atop the light fixture

robin’s nest

I’m hosting #HaibunMonday over at dVerse Poets’ Pub today. We are writing about the present moment. Come join us!

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44 responses to “Presence: A #Haibun (4/26/2021): Day 26 of #NationalPoetryMonth”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I can really feel how you start to enjoy that moment simply by describing it… the roar of windchimes as a sated lion is a wonderful image.

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  2. Linda Lee Lyberg Avatar

    Absolutely beautiful Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Linda! 😀

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  3. kim881 Avatar

    I love the use of sound in your haibun, Frank: the clock, Frank’s voice, the windchimes, all of which transport me to the scene; I also like the shift to feelings: the clenched gut, knotted shoulders, lumped throat and sore heart, and the way you bring them all together in the final paragraph – and then end on an ‘aftertaste of sweet potato tortilla chips’!

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  4. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    I love the notion that “Frank’s voice” somehow puts you in the third person, listening to yourself beg, cajole or pontificate. Your piece is a fine illustration of your prompt request.

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  5. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    Nice one, the sounds the sights oh and the relishof sweet potato. Yougotme with this one, iam completely absorbed

    Happy Monday
    Much💛love

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Gillena! 🙂

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  6. calmkate Avatar

    sound, action and aches shares your now, thanks Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Kate! 🙂

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  7. Ron. Avatar

    Clockticks and muffled conversations. Yes.
    You rock the haibun, Frank. Congrats.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Ron! 🙂

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  8. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    So well captured, and the last paragraph full of peace and contentment is so welcome!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Beverly! 🙂

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  9. msjadeli Avatar

    A nice spot to be.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jade! 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  10. rothpoetry Avatar

    A great post of here and now! Love the haiku twist!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Dwight! 🙂

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are welcome!

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  11. Truedessa Avatar

    I could hear the roar of windchimes and the tick tock of the mantel clock. The echo of your voice lingers in the room. Robins, do like to makes nest near a warm source.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! 🙂

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  12. ben Alexander Avatar

    Frank – there’s something so powerful for me about “just this” – it’s so universal.


    David

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Ben! 🙂

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  13. Lucy Avatar

    Very beautifully penned.

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  14. Dale Avatar

    That was deliciously written, Frank. Thank you for hosting this week!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Dale! 🙂

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  15. […] is Haibun Monday at dVerse and this week it is hosted by Frank J. Tassone.  It just so happens that I had plans to write about being present in the moment today.  And […]

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  16. Ali Grimshaw Avatar

    I really like this line,
    ” I delight in being startled by drooping dogwood blossoms, the neighbors’ blooming violets and overly thin golden retriever, the aftertaste of sweet potato tortilla chips.”
    This makes me smile. It sounds like joy in the small things.
    Thanks for the prompt.
    Ali

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Ali! 🙂

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  17. Misky Avatar

    At my age, I shouldn’t find peace and calm in the tick of a clock, but I do. My old clocks need rewinding daily, the way I feel often – needing to be rewound in the morning. Your haibun is very relatable.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Misky! 🙂

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  18. Susan St.Pierre Avatar

    Your haiku is perfect. A robin’s nest is a symbol of a hopeful future outcome. Wonderful last thought!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Susan! 🙂

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  19. nrk Avatar

    Beautiful write. 🌷🎶🖊

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  20. Helen Dehner Avatar

    Love the ‘just for today’ vibe in your haibun, beautifully composed. Thanks for the challenge, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Helen! 🙂

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  21. memadtwo Avatar

    You’ve captured the moment. (K)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, K! 🙂

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sara!

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  22. areadingwriter Avatar

    your descriptions took my breath away, Frank. The images here pop out from words to clear images: I delight in being startled by drooping dogwood blossoms, the neighbors’ blooming violets and overly thin golden retriever, the aftertaste of sweet potatoe tortilla chips.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! 🙂

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  23. Shirley Avatar

    Greatt read thankyou

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