
Storm King Mountain State park. Snowy trails. A family of four stumble along one. One of two children—a boy of about 12—slips and falls. None of them wear crimpons, micro spikes worn over footwear. Mira and I hike past them, wondering why people hike in winter so unprepared.
sunlit ascent
the swush-swush
of our boots
The trail bends around the curvature of Storm King Mountain’s southeastern slope. A steep drop-off to our right leads to the partially frozen Hudson River, some 1100 feet below. We take our first break on a rocky outcropping with views of Cold Spring. A father and son arrive. The father asks us to take a photo of them, and I oblige.
soft snow
removing
our gloves
Even with our crimpons, the descent along one trail is too steep and icy. Retracing our steps, we divert to an ascending leg of the trail, perpendicular to our original one. It is a familar one; we both hiked this route last summer. Soon, we see views of Bannerman Island, the Newburg-Beacon Bridge, and nearby Cornwell-on-Hudson.
ice flows
the current moving
in the channel
Stretches of gentle ascents and descents soon lead to Butternut Hill, and a near rock-scrambling descent over snowy and slushy ground. Down one hill, and our trail meanders ever steeply downward. We follow it, until we finally reach the snowy base from which we began.
nearly spring
buffeting the car
this sudden wind
My late contribution for my own hosing of dVerse Poets Pub’s Haibun Monday, where we wrote about Cold Mountain—the mountain experience, or in the style of the eponymous poet.
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Beautiful words Frank. Keep up your great work shalom 💥🇦🇺🙏
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It’s an adventure to be out and about in the mountains in winter. You’ve highlighted a few reasons why. Good idea to be very familiar with your terrain in the good weather so when you’re out in it in winter it can help you with the best paths.
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Thanks, Lisa! Winter hiking is an adventure we’ve come to love!
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Hi Frank, I really enjoyed this. I am just learning the finer points of haibun and this is a great example of how haiku and the style of verse work together.
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Thank you, Mark!
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Beautiful writing, Frank!
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The stages of the prose and haiku keep the reader with you every step of the way, I almost felt I was with you on the hike.
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Thank you!
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What an adventurous climb… those familiar paths can really become treacherous in cold and icy conditions.
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Thanks, Bjorn! You’re right about that!
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I like hiking in summer and snowshoeing in winter 🙂
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