I wonder at your brevity. So direct, and to the point. Short, then long, then short: always bending those two images into something new. But couldn’t you just elaborate a little more?
Wouldn’t our readers benefit more from a Tik Tok than a snapshot? Look, I know you pride yourself on being the shortest form, but honestly: people need context these days.
Do try and stretch it out, alright?
while I keep it brief…
“This is the way.”
Day 12 of
Categories: haiku community, haikai
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