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Prose to Haiku: a Meta-haibunic Dialogue

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I wonder at your brevity. So direct, and to the point. Short, then long, then short: always bending those two images into something new. But couldn’t you just elaborate a little more?

Wouldn’t our readers benefit more from a Tik Tok than a snapshot? Look, I know you pride yourself on being the shortest form, but honestly: people need context these days.

Do try and stretch it out, alright?

You bloviate

while I keep it brief…

“This is the way.”

Day 12 of

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