A Heartbreaking Homecoming

“I shall take rememberings by dismemberings” the Commandante kindly said “and keep them for you” as he dragged my loves through white snow…”

Anderson, H. (2010). “Maybe You Can Come Home“. In The plenitude of emptiness (pp. 56). haibun, Darlington Richards.

The moon pierces through the clouds, bathing the snow in a pale luminescence. I see you, kneeling before him. That sardonic smile of his never reaches those ice blue, bloodshot eyes.

Shadowy figures emerge from the glare of tower spotlights. I watch as anonymous guards dragging away your loves. I wince at that “jagged red path” left behind.

You taught me to let my prose flow like a gurgling book over time-smoothed stones. You showed me how haiku, concrete and ethereal, could complement such prose, like the aquatic dance of coy fish.

I reach out my hand, across the chasm of space and time between us. Knowing you will never grasp it.

Only my words can ever hope to do that.

bitter moon

these light-shadowed stars

for company

I first learned to love haibun by reading the work of Hortensia Anderson (1959 – 2012). Her posthumous collection of haibun, The Plenitude of Emptiness, is a treasure of haikai brilliance. Though we never met, I consider her one of my greatest writing teachers and haijin inspirations.

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15 responses to “A Heartbreaking Homecoming”

  1. dorahak Avatar

    “You showed me how haiku, concrete and ethereal, could complement such prose, like the aquatic dance of coy fish.” As a homage to a mentor across time and space, it’s hard to see how any tribute could be better than this haibun, mirroring all that you most admire and learned at the feet of your teacher.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Dora! 😀

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      1. dorahak Avatar

        You’re most welcome! 🙏

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  2. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    Wow!!! Again i am blown away by your fine haibun

    Much💛love

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  3. memadtwo Avatar

    I like the way you wove her work into your own. Excellent, Frank. (K)

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  4. pandamoniumcat Avatar

    Wow, wonderful haibun. I love this form and I think you have done your mentor proud. 🙂

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  5. marialberg Avatar

    I don’t know if it was supposed to be brook, but I really liked, “flow like a gurgling book over time.”

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    1. erbiage Avatar

      That caught me too. Typos/autocorrect are so frustrating but occasionally they reveal a gem. Frank this has such a feel to it, I can’t describe. Very well done

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    2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      🤣It’s definitely a typo–or a freudian slip! Either way, I’ll let it stand!

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  6. Grace Avatar

    I appreciate knowing this about you Frank. Love the tribute to the poet that continues to inspire you in your writing.

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  7. ren Avatar
    ren

    haibuns are so powerful! good job!

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  8. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love how this prompt brought forth all that inspiration… the darkness of your haibun (and haiku) really works with the season.

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  9. kim881 Avatar

    I can tell you love haibun, Frank! And this one is a beauty. I especially love ‘You taught me to let my prose flow like a gurgling book over time-smoothed stones’ and the haiku with its bitter moon and light-shadowed stars.

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  10. rothpoetry Avatar

    Well done, Frank.

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  11. purplepeninportland Avatar

    An excellent haibun, Frank!

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