“fishing…” a #tanka (4/25/24)

4/25/24: fishing

fishing

for the experience

of being alive

on a sunburnt face

the faintest breeze

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8 responses to ““fishing…” a #tanka (4/25/24)”

  1. Grace Avatar

    Love that sunburnt experience!

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  2. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    Love the fishing metaphor but tempered by sunburn and breeze…

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  3. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Love it, but I wonder if the fish would be alive as well…:-)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn.

      Do you mean the metaphorical fish that is the experience of being alive? ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  4. The Cheesesellers Wife Avatar

    You take us there – so well done!

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  5. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    Lovely, Frank. Fishing sounds very relaxing.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      It’s all about the metaphor… ๐Ÿ˜‰

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