Memorial Stone: A .@ImageCurve #haibun

Haibun Example, Green Grass
Photograph by Sascha Kohlmann

Mom and I see the headstone. Salmon, just as we chose. Smooth on top and along the sides, it emerges from a rough base of the same hue. Scattered grass grows on the flattened earth six feet in front of it.

We remove the in-ground matching vases. Struggle to insert the simple bouquets we bought at A&P. Water them.

A Burgundy flower bows and touches the foot of the monument at the space where my brother’s name will go someday.

Wind-chime melody

how still in the sun

our flowers

 

first published in Image Curve, October 15, 2014

 

for dVerse Poets Tuesday Poetics – Touch me (pubtended by Sarah)

 

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16 responses to “Memorial Stone: A .@ImageCurve #haibun”

  1. Grace Avatar

    Funny how I never noticed headstones until a family dies and have to be buried. I like the headstone color, salmon, as well as the wind chime melody. The sadness is felt.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Grace! 😀

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  2. Truedessa Avatar

    Headstones do have different textures, perhaps it represents the textures of life. I can feel the sadness – the stillness of sun.

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  3. sarahsouthwest Avatar

    The last line of the prose is so moving – the transient delicacy of the flower, the solidity of the stone, the sadness that brings them together in this moment. I’m sure the Japanese have a word that says all that. It’s a lovely piece, Frank, thank you for sharing it.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sarah! 😀

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  4. kim881 Avatar

    A touching haibun, Frank. I like the burgundy flower that bows and touches the foot of the monument, and the wind-chime melody – I don’t think we are allowed to hang wind chimes in trees British graveyards. I love them.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      I think the wind-chime was on a property adjoining the cemetery. Thanks, Kim! 😀

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  5. Rob Kistner Avatar
    Rob Kistner

    Beautiful Frank! So tender. We buried our 18-year-old son years ago, in Cincinnati Ohio, where we lived st the time of his tragic death.. We now live in Seattle. At 71, my failed health makes the rigors of travel difficult for me. But my good friend checks on his gravesight from time to time, and sends me a photo of the memorial every year on my son’s birthday, and on the date of his death, showing me the flowrers I have placed there for us on those dates. Those photos are precious. Your piece here put a tear in my eye…

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      I’m honored. Thank you. My sympathy for your loss.

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  6. myforever77 Avatar

    Today is the 5th anniversary of my mom’s departing, she was 98 years and quite ready to leave this world, but I still miss her. Thanks for your writing.

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I have not any headstone to visit… all my close relatives are in a crypt… but I know the emotion of seeing the date of my mother and aunt yet without a date.

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  8. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I liked the haiku with the still flowers in the sun.

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  9. katiemiafrederick Avatar

    Touch of Those
    We Still Love
    Etched
    in the
    LIving
    TombStone of heARTs
    Souls Live on in eYes of LoVE ToucH..:)

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