Enshadowed Illumination: A #Prosery #AmericanSentence #haibun

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You weren’t supposed to know.

Our adoptive parents received a business letter with a mistake, one that costs lawyers their livelihoods: my name

“Jamie.”

We shared one life from that moment: you, ever in the clear light of day; I, always in the shadows. Your life was my could-have-been. You, with your second-birth-certificate name, usurped me.

But one night, at three in the morning, you heard the scream. Not my name. Yours.

“Frankie!”

From then on, I shared with you my disposessed identity’s anger, the power of “this shouldn’t be!” My rage became your armor against the violence they unleashed tearing themselves apart.

Now, you honor me. You write our poetry–with me, through me– and translate the silence of mysterious Being. You embrace me; we live united at last.

So this, I know:

“You will love again the stranger who was your self.”

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27 responses to “Enshadowed Illumination: A #Prosery #AmericanSentence #haibun”

    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Truly? I had hoped the ending would be endearing. Thanks! 🙂

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  1. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    This reminded me of stories of studies that were done of twins separated at birth. Great write!

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  2. kanzensakura Avatar

    I agree with Linda. But a good solid write.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      😆 Between the intentions/craft of the writer, and the understanding of the reader is the dance of the construction of meaning! Thank you, Toni! I appreciate your feedback! 😀

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  3. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    Compelling read, Frank. For me, it feels like the prologue of a great novel or an extended short story. Lots of room to play with this.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Victoria! 😀

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  4. Fleur McMorrow Avatar
    Fleur McMorrow

    I LOVE this, especially the ending.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it! 😀

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      1. Fleur McMorrow Avatar
        Fleur McMorrow

        Most welcome, Sir 🙂

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  5. memadtwo Avatar

    I like the way so much is left unsaid. And I agree, spooky. (K)

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    There is a mystery of who the they of “they unleashed tearing themselves apart” but it sounds like Frankie’s parents, whom Jamie, his birth identity, gave him strength to fight/resist. Or they is the birth parents who gave Jamie up so he could be Frankie with his new family? Jung talks about the “shadow self” and to me Jamie sounds like Frankie’s, through twist of fate rather than other means. Interesting story, in any case!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Well-said, Jade! And you grasped where I was going with it. Thank you! 😀

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You are welcome. Jamie and Frankie sound like a strong tag team.

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  7. kim881 Avatar

    I like the intrigue of the opening sentence, Frank, which led me straight into the story. I’d like to know the age of the twins, how long they had been living with swapped names. Is Jamie a ghost? Or even a ghost writer? Or is it Frankie who’s the ghost? I enjoyed the speculation, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Kim! 😀

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  8. calmkate Avatar

    adoption is not often good … you shared something intriguing and very real here … well written!
    I agree it could become more, it is a prelude with more to unfold … and deeply personal

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! I appreciate it! 😀

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  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I might have read it differently than the others… I don’t see two persons but one… a boy who has been adopted and finds out. There is that feeling that he sees the totally different life he could have had as Jamie, and somehow that possibility becomes a shadow of himself, but I agree with Victoria, this could be a wonderful beginning of a novel

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      🙂 You discerned exactly where I was going with this one, Bjorn. Bravo! Thank you for your kind feedback! 🙂

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  10. gillena cox Avatar
    gillena cox

    Luv tge opening. It made me say WHAT?? and i just had to read on

    Much❤✏❤love

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Gillena! 😀

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