Wayback Wednesday 8/16/17: a #Thanksgiving gone wrong…#writephoto #haibun #haiku #poetry

crow

Conflicted Expectations

ย We cleared gravy-stained plates and tainted wine glasses. The remains of the turkey could feed the five of us for days.

It was the first year we didnโ€™t host. Mom and Dad invited us downstairs instead. We had arranged to eat dinner with them and then travel to my Sister-in-lawโ€™s for dessert. She hosted dinner for the rest of my wifeโ€™s family in our place.

As we said goodbye, my fatherโ€™s sadness showed in his resigned eyes. I carried his face with me long after we left.

โ€œDid we leave too early?โ€ I asked. We had already passed the Spring Valley Toll on the Thruway.

She glared at me. Her silence was answer enough.

I felt only my clenched hands on the wheel as a forgotten song played on a forgotten station.

Thanksgiving Day–

A murder of crows

Takes flight

 

First published in Contemporary Haibun Online, October 2013, Volume 8, Number 3.ย  Republished in Contemporary Haibun v. 14, Red Moon Press

 

UPDATE: for Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo Prompt–Crow #writephoto

 

 

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17 responses to “Wayback Wednesday 8/16/17: a #Thanksgiving gone wrong…#writephoto #haibun #haiku #poetry”

  1. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I really felt this.. the pressure and the bad consciousness of how much time to spend with parents and relatives.

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  2. Donna@LivingFromHappiness Avatar

    It is hard to not be conflicted at holidays with so many expecting so much from us….I felt the stab of pain as sometimes I may have left too early…and I regret it but too late. Love the haibun and haiku!

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  3. John Buchanan Avatar

    It’s not until my own children left that I realised just what a child leaving home means to a parent.

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  4. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    The pressures are even greater in our modern world with fractured families and divorces and remarriages, and family members in far-flung places. The “family center” as it used to be fades, sad to say. Your words were touching.

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  5. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    You have captured the strained obligatory nature of the holidays, kiddo. Well done.

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  6. Truedessa Avatar

    I can feel the tension and tinge of guilt. Sometimes we feel too thin during the holidays.

    I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Truedessa!

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  7. ZQ Avatar

    That was excellent, thanks.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      My pleasure. Thank you!

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  8. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    My goodness this is potent! You have portrayed the strained obligatory nature of the holidays so well here!

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  9. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    It is difficult to finely tune our holiday obligations. We will upset someone…
    Anna :o]

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, Anna. Thanks for reading.

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  10. Sue Vincent Avatar

    A powerfully written indictment of expectation, Frank. Thank you.

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