An Oil Change: a flashback #haibun for #dVerse OLN

An Oil Change

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ย A Latino couple rests on the dark-gray leather couch opposite me. His thoroughly stained white painterโ€™s pants and Sherman white sweatshirt somehow contrast and complement her matching light-gray sweat suit. An Orthodox couple with a toddler sits on burgundy cushion chairs nearby. A rhythmic pounding blends with Asian TV and a muffled radio broadcast. A Mobile banner torn in the middle flaps in a passing breeze.

An attendant tells me I have a head-casket leak as well as an engine oil and transmission fluid leak.

How convenient.

white Cirrus cloudsโ€ฆ
budding maples swaying
in another breeze

 

First published in Image Curve, October 7, 2014

Photograph by Ryan McGuire

 

For dVerse OLN #207, Thursday, November 2, 2017

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30 responses to “An Oil Change: a flashback #haibun for #dVerse OLN”

  1. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    When you wait at the garage you have to watch… until that critical point when they give you the diagnosis… almost like going to the doctor.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! And somehow we always need to pay more for something! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi (@rizvi_sanaa) Avatar

    This is so true.. often we are handed more issues in exchange for monetary benefit.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      not the exchange we’re looking for, right?

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  3. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Time to get the car fixed.

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  4. lillian Avatar

    Sitting waiting for a service….at the car shop/garage, the doctor, the dentist, in the hall awaiting a teacher/parent conference….as we sit, we notice. There are others around us and we see them. Notice them. Because we are sitting waiting.
    Although these days, I see most sitting and “plugged in” with headphones/earbuds growing out of their ears, noticing nothing except their flying fingers on their devices.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      ๐Ÿ˜† I can relate!

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  5. kanzensakura Avatar

    The haiku is beautiful!

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  6. jillys2016 Avatar

    Love the imagery of this, Frank.

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  7. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    The banalities of life and then bam! A beautiful unexpected Haiku. Bravo!

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  8. Vivian Zems Avatar

    If it’s not one thing…it’s another! Your haiku just blew across my screen!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      LOL! Glad you enjoyed it!

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar

        Loved it ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. qbit Avatar

    A “head casket leak”! That is amazing. And the Haiku catches the hint of all that mixed up culture.

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  10. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    Wonderful observations of the observations in the art of waiting…and then the dx! How convenient. (This made me smile.)
    And then the haiku as the crowning glory.
    Love it.
    Anna :o]

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  11. Grace Avatar

    I can relate to the waiting and people watching, smiles ~ I also thought your haiku is gorgeous.

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  12. peterfrankiswrites Avatar

    Ha. There’s so much here, the waiting, the multi-cultural families and the attendant (bringer of the news – it’s a boy, it’s terminal etc.) – your verse conjured all those waiting rooms where we’ve all waited for something – and the haiku is a terrific coda – optimistic and bright.

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  13. Sue Anderson Avatar

    I have been to this place. More than once. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. mhmp77 Avatar
    mhmp77

    kaykuala

    Anything is possible with cars these days. Love the haiku, Frank!

    Hank

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  15. Mary (tqhousecat) Avatar

    Oh, with a 97, oil changes are always nail-biters. Been there too many times. I love the haiku.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Mary. Somehow, these oil change places find something wrong that my own mechanic misses! ๐Ÿ˜†

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