A #tankaProse for A Month with Yeats: Day 15 #haibun #tanka #poetry #dversepoets

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By John M, CC BY-SA 2.0, Link

You, too, have come where the dim tides are hurled
Upon the wharves of sorrow, and heard ring

The bell that calls us on; the sweet far thing.โ€™ โ€”W.B. Yeats

A Blood Rose Victory

The stars fall as the last light of day fades. Tails of fire light up the coming darkness. Even the heavens mourn.

We stand among our fallen. I see the friends I laughed with a fortnight ago. How we laughed at our own bawdy stories by the fire, passing the ale horn around. Now, their last expressions of surprise and sorrow are all they show. All to possess a land whose cost we cannot bear.

The bell rings now. I know not who brought it, or where from. It’s clang echoes across this windswept plain. The Tuatha De Danann have fled, and the song of the bell will surely keep them away.

It just fails to console us that lie exhausted among our dead on this field of our victory.

blood-drenched tide

ย tears on this wharf of sorrow

never dry

the shattered ale horn rots

beside my friend’s marred hand

 

Trouvelot-_The_November_meteors._-_1868

The November Meteors by ร‰tienne Lรฉopold Trouvelot, 1868

 

for Jane Dougherty’s A Month with Yeats: Day Fifteen andย Poets United–Midweek Motif–Meteor Showers

 

UPDATE: And for dVerse poets pub MTB: Symbolism (12/7/17)

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31 responses to “A #tankaProse for A Month with Yeats: Day 15 #haibun #tanka #poetry #dversepoets”

  1. Susan Chast Avatar

    Powerful as Yeats, indeed! I get a sense of a visitation of the dead, riding on the meteors. It makes me wonder if anyone in the poem was left alive.

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  2. John Buchanan Avatar

    I can hear the bell tolling and see the rotting ale horn, a powerful poem.

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  3. Sumana Roy Avatar

    is it about some mythology? seems like the story of fallen heroes.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      The earlier Yeats quotes inspired Tanka that addressed the legendary invasion of Ireland by the Iberian Celts. The latest lines inspired me to consider the aftermath of the decisive battle of that invasion. A story of fallen heroes indeed.

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  4. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    And yet the Gaels did manage to keep what they had won. It’s the Tuatha De we miss now.

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  5. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    Unless devoid of humanity, I guess it hard to find consolation in victory gained in blood and death.
    A powerful poem indeed.
    Anna :o]

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  6. purplepeninportland Avatar

    I hear that bell tolling. Creative and powerful poem, Frank.

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  7. Sherry Marr Avatar

    You brought this home. “Even the heavens mourn”, and the fallen’s expressions of surprise and sorrow. Sigh. Thanks for speaking the intolerably high cost of war.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      My pleasure, Sherry. Thank you for your kind feedback!

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  8. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    Painfully beautiful, evocative, Frank. This one will stay with me for a while. (I lost my father who I never knew in WWII).

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Victoria. Iโ€™m sorry about your father.

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  9. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice use of the stars falling.

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  10. rothpoetry Avatar

    The red tide and the wharf of sorrow… a wonderful poem of sadness in the midst of victory, For whom the bell tolls… for all!
    Dwight

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Dwight!

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  11. Grace Avatar

    The price of victory is very costly and we will cherish those lives forever~

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  12. susanmehr Avatar

    Beautiful, full of meaning, heartfelt.

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  13. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    My response is as of the 16 Nov. Frank.
    Kind regards
    Anna :o]

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  14. Vivian Zems Avatar

    I love your haibuns. This is a compelling tale…..but who are the
    Tuatha De Danann ?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      They are the people of the Goddess Danuโ€”the legendary primordial, supernatural inhabitants of Ireland:

      https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tuatha_D%C3%A9_Danann?wprov=sfti1https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tuatha_D%C3%A9_Danann?wprov=sfti1

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar

        Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š- got it!

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  15. Kathy Reed Avatar

    Thirty five percent Irish and I didn’t know this story, but love the Yeats quote. You have a way with words leaving us wanting more.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! You didnโ€™t hear the story because itโ€™s original, although inspired by the myth of the Tiara de Danan and Morgan Llewlanโ€™s Bard.

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  16. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I have never felt that victory can be gained in battle… the best battle is the one we can avoid… that said there are moments when we cannot choose

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