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rippling pond
a long search in vain for
the ties that bind
How much longer will you stare
for the answer that won’t come?
More gray than I’d like to admit. Growing crow’s feet. Lines under my blue eyes I don’t see in myself. A sorrow in those eyes, along side a determination to see things through. So, I take the next breath, the next look, and turn toward life.
Always, another step. Another breath.
Until there isn’t.
The mirror doesn’t lie either way.
Harvest moon
surprised by joy yet again
when I see your face
For you I treasure, therefore
you are where my heart must lie
For dverse–Tuesday Poetics, hosted by Bjorn, and
Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge no. 69, and
Kiwinana’s #Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge–82, and
Categories: haikai, haiku community
Beautiful, real treasure the joy seen it someones face. enjoy.
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That’s wonderful! The person you are looking at is the best expression of your true self you will ever see
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Love all three!
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Thanks, Mary! It’s actually one Tanka-prose poem with two Tanka “stanzas”
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Nicely said.
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Reblogged this on Reena Saxena.
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Thanks, Reena!
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Oh – sometimes i much rather look at the moon.
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😆 me, too!
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‘How much longer will you stare for the answer that won’t come?’.. this is so poignant!
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Thanks!
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Lovely tanka sequence, Frank, sweetly poignant.
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Thanks, Jane!
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🙂
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Good point about the mirror not lying at least to the extent is reflects well.
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Thanks!
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Frank, You are writing some amazing poetry, here. Well done!! ❤
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Thanks, Colleen! 😀
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This is good!
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Thanks, Petru! 😀
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All three are lovely. 🙂
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Thank you! 😀
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The mirror doesn’t lie but sometimes the heart does.
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