Vernal Inauguration: A #ThrowdownThursday #haibun featuring my latest from .@ImageCurve

 

 

The train rattles to the top of the hill. Two American flags stand like sentries at the apex. The stage, the other side of the park, the Long Island shoreline across the Sound all lie in sight for one fleeting moment.

Then the train rushes down the first turn, accelerating. Next, it descends the first hill. Frankie and I throw our hands in the air and scream! Down, up, another turn, down two more.

 

Then up into the mouth of the dragon!

 

Through darkness, we turn. Then descend out of the tail and back into daylight.

More ups, downs, arounds. Until we finally come to a stop where we began.

 

Where our summer truly begins!

Summer afternoon
another ride on Playland’s
Dragon Coaster

 

 

Photo by Jeffrey Blum

 

first published in Image Curve, June 28, 2018

 

for dVerse Poets’ OpenLinkNights #223 (pubtended by Bjorn)

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31 responses to “Vernal Inauguration: A #ThrowdownThursday #haibun featuring my latest from .@ImageCurve”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    What fun it would be… such a long time since I were on a roller-coaster… the thrill of that is like summer… it’s like being with friends.

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  2. Charley Avatar

    You have described the experience in a way that makes me sweat boyish panic.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Yeah! That’s the spirit! Thanks, Charley!

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      1. Charley Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  3. kanzensakura Avatar

    I love roller coasters. And you have described this beautifully. Into the mouth of the dragon indeed. Have you ever ridden that wooden monster on Coney Island? It is a jerky scare. The haiku is most excellent.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Toni! I think the original wooden coaster was destroyed by Hurricane Sandy in ‘12. I don’t know if they replaced it, and if so, when.

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      1. kanzensakura Avatar

        I think it was destroyed and not rebuilt. Sad. It was an icon but Sandy whooshed a lot of those things away.

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  4. lifelessons Avatar

    This looks like some huge machine from above.

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  5. Jo Avatar

    What a rush a roller coaster is! You’ve described it very well.

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  6. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    You make it sound like fun. Well done.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      It was fun! 😆 thanks! 😀

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  7. rothpoetry Avatar

    Sometimes summer really feels like a coaster ride. It hoes so fast with some unexpected twists and turns.
    Great post Frank.
    dwight

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Dwight! 😀

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  8. Gay Reiser Cannon Avatar

    This captures summer in time and space. Wonderfully achieved.

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  9. Grace Avatar

    Those summer rides can be fun but I got dizzy just reading your share, smiles ~ Happy summer to you ~

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Grace! You, too! 😀

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  10. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    This is so in tune with the summer frolic and fun. I really liked the senryu. 🙂
    -HA

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, HA! 😀

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  11. lillian Avatar

    Now that’s a real roller coaster ride through your words! Whew!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, lillian! The Dragon Coaster at Rye Playland is the real deal! It’s one of the oldest roller coasters in the US still in continuous use.

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  12. annell4 Avatar

    It seems a perfect memory!!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks! 😀

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sara! 🙂

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  13. Linda Kruschke Avatar

    I felt like I was right there on the coaster with you! I love roller coasters, though my neck doesn’t appreciate when I go on them anymore. Perhaps too many roller coasters has something to do with that. Great start to summer!

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  14. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    From the view of the image the ride looks beautifully symmetrical and calm. Just the opposite of the experience being on it.

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  15. Jay Avatar

    Delightful poem. God I need a rollercoaster ride everyday!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Happy you enjoyed it, Jay! Thanks! 🙂

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