Sea Shore Encounters: a #writephoto #haibun

sea-mist

 

The waves slap the shore again and again. White foam crests burst into sprays of saline moisture. The sporadic cry of passing terns adds a staccato harmony to the rumbling surf’s deep bass.

 

I sat here more than sixteen years ago–at night. The last light of the moon passed behind the gathering rainclouds from the west. The same rhythmic melody of surf on turn. No terns at night, of course, so no harmony.

 

Now, I lose myself in the movement of wind and water. The years between visits flash before me: the wild-eyed uncertainties of a college student on exchange, the early struggles in the real world, marriage, our son’s birth, and our raising him to young manhood. It all happened so fast!

 

Another crash. Another splash of mist. Another wave withdraws. All that’s left is the smooth, wet sand left behind.

 

hot zenith

the sea breeze

dries my tears

 

 

 

for Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo prompt wave #writephoto

UPDATE: for Poets United Poetry Pantry #409

 

 

 

 

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16 responses to “Sea Shore Encounters: a #writephoto #haibun”

  1. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    It is astonishing how fast it all rushes by…….the ever constant rhythm of the waves is so comforting, in response.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I think it takes such a revisit to ponder the passage of time… love how you let the waves bring back the memories.

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  3. clayandbranches Avatar

    Beautiful poem, Frank. Time is rarely kind, but its passage doesn’t merely age us. There’s wisdom to be gained in its passage, and humility, and appreciation for a life well-lived.

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  4. divalounger Avatar
    divalounger

    Really a beautiful write Frank–I find haibun a difficult form–but yours always feel so effortless–

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! 😀 I have practiced the form for many years, now. Perhaps that accounts for why my haibun appears effortless.

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  5. Vivian Zems Avatar

    It’s good to have a place that acts as a focal point about which you measure time. In your case, from a young man to a husband and dad. I love the description of terns bringing harmony during the day, but not at night. Overall, a beautiful write.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Vivian! 😀

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      1. Vivian Zems Avatar

        You’re welcome!

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  6. thotpurge Avatar

    To go back to the beginning of the journey is also a way to move forward… !

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  7. kim881 Avatar

    You brought a tear to my eye this morning with your beautiful, sorrowful haibun, Frank. I love the way it starts with sensory images, which transport me to the shore, and the shift from image to memory and back to the present again. The haiku is a gem.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Kim! 😀

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  8. Sarah Russell Avatar

    I’ve been there — a place that was, and still is, your own, with time the only change. I love the reverie of this, Frank. Well done!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sue! 😀

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