Strongest Wind: A #TankaTuesday #tankaprose

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“Strongest wind remains unseen” –from The Joy Luck Club

 

 

We see, and we believe. Yes, it has served us well, this “seeing is believing,” when we address pratical matters. What happens, however, when we confront the sublime?

 

There, we must abandon the seen for the unseen.

 

Who sees the wind? And yet we all know it is there by the woosh of air and the rustle of leaves it leaves in its wake. So, too, the truth of the Way, the movement of the Spirit. It moves unseen, and yet leaves visible signs of its passing.

 

How else can you describe the courage of campanesos following Bishop Oscar Romero toward a church occupied by armed soldiers more-than ready to fire upon them all? How else can you explain the discipline of civil rights demonstrators that sang “We shall Overcome” while surrounded by entrenched, cursing and violent white supremicists?

 

That which is hidden manifests in our sight in ways that which we cannot imagine.

 

morning twilight

a silence once shattered

by songbirds

where our hope and despair

converge in a zeal unseen

 

 

forย Colleenโ€™s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 96, โ€œCongregate & Passion,โ€ #SynonymsOnly

Real Toads’ย The Tuesday Platform (imagined by Pat)

dVerse Poets Pub’s Tuesday Poetics: Unseen Things (pubtended by Jilly)

 

 

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73 responses to “Strongest Wind: A #TankaTuesday #tankaprose”

  1. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    The hidden that manifests itself in those wonderful ways is well defined and as in your words, we are reminded of it often. I like your prose with its powerful feeling. Twilight seems to be a perfect time for the hope and despair to come together and become something as beautiful as the song of the birds.
    I really liked it.
    -HA

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, -HA! I appreciate your feedback! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. jazzytower Avatar

    I really enjoyed this tankaprose. This feels like a co-mingling of faith and fate and this always yields interesting results.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      I agree, Pat! Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love how you move from the unseen to the abstract, the courage and the strive for change is so much like a wind… relentless.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  4. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Frank, I think you found the secret to creating great poetry. You concentrated on your themes of change and faith. This is one of your best! Bravo!! โค

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen. I appreciate your kind feedback! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        Your poetry has been phenomenal lately. I’m in awe. ๐Ÿ˜€ Or, I’m tuned in and getting your prose.

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  5. jillys2016 Avatar

    Your use of the alliterative phrases makes this an essential read-aloud, Frank. The leaves are so repetitive and you’ve captured that. A real joy of a poem filled with conundrums. Appreciate the Amy Tan quote – she is in my first unit next week ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jilly! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. kim881 Avatar

    Very nicely done, Frank, and I love the tanka!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Kim! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Good observation: “the truth of the Way, the movement of the Spirit. It moves unseen, and yet leaves visible signs of its passing.”

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Frank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Carrie Van Horn Avatar

    I love the truth that rings out from this Frank! A lovely and thought provoking tanka!!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Carrie! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Glenn Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    We dipped our pen in similar ponds of thought. Ironically, even though seeing is believing, each of us is restricted to our perceptual interpretation of what we believe we saw. You have a strong tanka.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Glenn! I saw that our thematic streams did cross. Wonderful work on yours, btw!

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  10. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    Morning twilight after a long dark night always gives us another chance to hope for best yet unseen or try to overcome the despair of not knowing where it would turn. Very thoughtful and inspirational, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Miriam! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        You’re welcome,Frank. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. Suzanne Avatar
    Suzanne

    This is very intense, sophisticated writing conveying complex ideas. It took me on quite a journey.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Glad you experienced the journey, Suzanne. How was it? ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. Suzanne Avatar
        Suzanne

        The only answer I can really give to that question Frank is to direct you to my own poem for this prompt and add – these are strange days indeed –
        https://beinginnatureblog.wordpress.com/2018/08/08/beings-of-light/

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      2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        Indeed! You weren’t kidding! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  12. nosaintaugustine Avatar

    I really like the conflict inherent in the convergence of hope and despair- powerful!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  13. Magaly Guerrero Avatar

    Practicality without imagination doesn’t offer true living. At least, it does not for me. So, yes, I shall dance with the unseen… and believe what suits my needs. ๐Ÿ™‚

    Love the thought of songbird creating a sort of balance.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, itโ€™s often the case with the unseen that believing is seeing. Thanks, magaly! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  14. V.J. Knutson Avatar

    The tanka is beautiful. There are forces that we cannot see and yet, know exist. This feels like an opening to deeper discussion.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, a discussion that has proceeded since civilization, if not the Age of Enlightenment! Thanks, VJ!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  15. Charley Avatar

    Beautifully done, Frank! Worthy of a second read… and a third….

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  16. rothpoetry Avatar

    A wonderful description of the power of faith that cannot be seen or explained. Yet the power is there to allow men and women to do the unthinkable in this world even at risk of their own lives. Beautifully done Frank.

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  17. rothpoetry Avatar

    Yes, rather boring actually!

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  18. areadingwriter Avatar

    Brilliant peace on faith and changes!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  19. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Morning twilight, love that phrase. Between dark and light, a bit of both and neither.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Iโ€™m fascinated with that time, that synergy of light and darkness! Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        Me too. The light changes too quickly though.

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  20. oldegg Avatar

    What a glorious tanka this is.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! I appreciate that! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  21. Vandana Sharma Avatar
    Vandana Sharma

    Wow! A morning filled with hope and some despair, but challenges us to face our fears with full enthusiasm.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. When the opposites complement in their mysterious convergence, something new emerges. Thanks for reading! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  22. vintage jellies Avatar

    Ooh, I love the last line.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  23. Lona Gynt Avatar

    I am interested in how hope and despair can converge to create action. The resultant zeal almost has a lightning strike feel to it, in contrast to the softer sounds of twilight and morning and songbirds. very lovely.
    By the way, you are a character in a post I did for dVerse anniversary week, I don’t think you were with us that week. It was done in satirical jest, but came from a place of earnest gratitude for the dVerse crew. Can I link you to it? Might make you smile (she says as she looks around nervously and coughs… hehe)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Lona! I appreciate your feedback. As for the link: Of course! I would love to read it! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Lona Gynt Avatar

        yippee! ok here is the link, how it brings a smile. ๐Ÿ™‚

        BTT #36: Broken Quadrille

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      2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        ROTFLOL!!! I loved it all. Your haiku’s last line: priceless! I commented on it, so check it out! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  24. Lona Gynt Avatar

    oops, I think that just linked to a comment, so just scroll up and all that jazz ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  25. Rommy Avatar
    Rommy

    I am drawn in by the idea of a convergence of hope and dispair, and wonder about the beauty of intangible things. Those do have a curious power over our hearts.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. Thanks, Rommy! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  26. mhmp77 Avatar
    mhmp77

    kaykuala

    where our hope and despair
    converge in a zeal unseen

    Life somehow is able to make their own adjustments

    Hank

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Hank! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  27. annell4 Avatar

    Yes, so much we cannot see….nicely done!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Annell! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  28. lillian Avatar

    I have always loved tanka….and this tanka prose is wonderful. Do you belong to the Tanka Society of America? I so enjoy their journals, Ribbons, and participating with them.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Lillian! ๐Ÿ™‚ No, I don’t belong to the TSA, but I am am a member of the United Haiku and Tanka Society (publisher of Cattails) and the Haiku Society of America (publisher of Frogpond).

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  29. Sreeja Harikrishnan Avatar

    Great and beautiful lines!!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  30. Linda Kruschke Avatar

    I love this! The flow, the message, the internal rhymes — simply delightful.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Linda! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  31. MNL Avatar

    a lovely tanka paying homage to some very brave folks

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  32. Vashti Q Avatar

    Hello, Frank! I think you described ‘Faith’ beautifully. Very well done! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Vashti! ๐Ÿ˜€

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