“Walking the Path…”: A #writephoto #haibun

waiting

 

Where are you leading me?

 

The mist rolls in. The cold and rain accompanying it envelop me like a fisherman’s expertly cast net. The ascent continues. To where, I don’t know.

 

Only that your whisper, “follow me,” drives me onward.

 

But the climb besieges me. I think of the colleague and friend I just lost. I remember our last beer together, our last word exchanged in his classroom. Why him, when he was one of the best of us?

 

Nevertheless, there you wait. Again, I hear your whisper, “follow me.”

 

And so I do. By placing one foot in front of the other. Then doing it again, and again. Always, one step at a time.

 

summit

a sudden break

in the clouds

 

 

For Sue Vincent’sย Thursday photo prompt: Watcher #writephoto

 

UPDATE:ย for dVerse Poets’ Tueday Poetics– Frustration and Heartbreak (pubtended by Frank Hubeney)

 

 

 

 

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12 responses to ““Walking the Path…”: A #writephoto #haibun”

  1. memadtwo Avatar

    All those questions with no answers…(K)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks for reading! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  2. Sue Vincent Avatar

    Grief always brings questions. I love the haiku, Frank, ending on a note of hope and clarity.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sue! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    Thank you for the Haibun, Frank. My husband lost his best friend, an extraordinary guy. We miss him tremendously and often ask, “Why him?” I love your Haiku, a view from the summit to get a different perspective!

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  4. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Going above the clouds is a good metaphor for overcoming sorrow. Even the walk up the mountain can feel like more sorrow. Nicely done.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Frank! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  5. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love the clouds opening in the end… getting through sorrow is a lot like climbing.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Bjorn! ๐Ÿ™‚

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