Haunted Wandering: A #TankaTuesday #TankaProse (10/9/18)

 

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The spindly branches of naked oaks become grasping, withered hands in the waning light. An engulfing fog obscures the peering eyes of curious nocturnals. The single light of the A-frame, jutting out of the fog and trees, offers the only refuge.

 

And not an inviting one.

 

Try to ignore every horror film motif. Silence those survival instincts that scream to turn around. Seek the ominous shelter.

 

What could possibly go wrong?

 

Eerie hues

in the dying Autumn light

an owl in flight

the racing pulse and short breaths

as darkness descends at last

 

 

for Colleen’sย WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 105, โ€œCOLOR & CREEPY,โ€ #SYNONYMSONLY

 

and Real Toads’ Tuesday Platformย (imagined by Sanaa Rizvi)

 

 

 

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17 responses to “Haunted Wandering: A #TankaTuesday #TankaProse (10/9/18)”

  1. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    Very spooky. A perfect October poem!

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  2. thotpurge Avatar

    Everything that can go wrong, does!!! Very atmospheric tanka!

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  3. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    Ooh, dark and spooky. I liked the image of spindly branches as withered hands in the dark.
    -HA

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  4. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Ohh this is deliciously dark and perfect for the season! ๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€

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  5. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Fabulous Haibun, Frank. You have the right amount of darkness to make this poem creepy! Well done! โค

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  6. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

    Very scary, indeed. Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Miriam! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Miriam Hurdle Avatar

        You’re welcome, Frank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Carrie Van Horn Avatar

    A great goose bumps read that is perfect for this month! Love this Frank!

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  8. Marian Avatar

    Haha, well? A lot could probably go wrong. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. Vashti Q Avatar

    Ooh! Tough choice. Eerie cabin in the woods or nocturnal animals in the foggy forest โ€“โ€“ yikes! I enjoyed your Haibun!

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