Regret: A #TankaProse (10/17/18)

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So much bounty that we always took for granted. Always wanting more, never enjoying what we had. Until we realized–too late–that time was the one scarcity that mattered.

 

Now, our hall remains empty. Others take possession of what was ours. All that remains of us is the echo of our coveting. The “hungry ghosts,” little more than a troubled memory, that want for the only treasure we can never have.

 

shortening days

fallen leaves rustled

by a breeze

how empty these vain lives were

how restless these spirits are

 

 

for Colleen’sย WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 106, โ€œGHOST & HOLLOW,โ€ #SYNONYMSONLY

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14 responses to “Regret: A #TankaProse (10/17/18)”

  1. thotpurge Avatar

    So much truth there…we do take the abundance of goodness for granted.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. Thank you!

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  2. Vivian Zems Avatar

    I like this , Frank! There’s a ghostly quality about those ‘rusting leaves’….much like ‘restless spirits’.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Vivian! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    This was fabulous, Frank. In Buddhism, we have hungry ghosts. This article really explains them well: https://www.thoughtco.com/hungry-ghosts-449825. I would have to say that your Haibun Tanka nailed this concept well. Great job! โค

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      I was going for the Buddhist hungry ghosts concept in that simile. I’m glad you think that I nailed it! Thanks, Colleen! ๐Ÿ™‚

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      1. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
        Colleen Chesebro

        Excellent work, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  4. Vashti Q Avatar

    I love this, Frank! My favorite line, ‘All that remains of us is the echo of our coveting’. Wow! Great Haibun. ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Vashti! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Vashti Q Avatar

        You’re welcome. I forgot to tell you that the image is great too. Enjoy your week!

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