Metanoia

Mardi Gras arrives again. The revelers gather to embrace the excess that precedes the abstinance. There is a time to feast and a time to fast. But there are no parades for us: no thrown beads, no expositions, no chanting crowds of tourists. Our celebration is a simple fried chicken filete dinner with broccoli rabe and polenta.

nightingale song

the deep cold before

the coming warmth

The revels end at midnight. Ash Wednesday then inaugurates another Lent, a liturgical season of reflection and retreat. There is a time to break down and a time to build up. The practice of letting go allows the mind to think clearly, and the heart to feel deeply. The practice of living simply lets others simply live. Our small sacrifices of comfort allow us time to serve others in their need. Our investing time in prayer and meditation draws us closer to our God who is Love.

morning sparrow

the first light of another

lengthening day

There is a time to fast and a time to feast. There is a time to break down and a time to build up. Knowing the time, and acting accordingly, makes all the difference.

always

another journey

new hope

for Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 126, “Poet’s Choice of Words”

Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform (imagined by Anmol (HA))

and dVerse Poets’ Tuesday Poetics: Turn, Turn, Turn . . . (pubtended by lillian)

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32 responses to “Metanoia”

  1. Sherry Blue sky Avatar

    I especially love that morning sparrow at first light.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sherry! 😀

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  2. lillian Avatar

    Beautifully combining the liturgical season, mardi gras, Eccliastes….in a haibun with wonderful haiku.
    So glad you posted to the prompt!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, lillian! 😀

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  3. rothpoetry Avatar

    This is really a great one Frank. I love the idea of lent being a time to let go and a time to refocus. This line was especially good…The practice of living simply lets others simply live,

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Dwight! 😀

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  4. L. Stevens Avatar
    L. Stevens

    I loved all three haikus! They had great continuity and could stand alone in their own trio.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! I appreciate that! 😀

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      1. L. Stevens Avatar
        L. Stevens

        Your welcome!

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  5. thotpurge Avatar

    All the nuances of the season… lovely read.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you 🙏 😀

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  6. Grace Avatar

    Knowing the time and acting accordinly makes all the difference. Sometimes we also appreciate it in hindsight. Love the nightingale song and morning sparrow.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Grace! 😀

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  7. Suyash J Avatar
    Suyash J

    Nicely written. There’s a song called metanoia by porcupine tree which would go great with this

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  8. msjadeli Avatar

    such quiet and peace emanating from your selections. it is calming to read them.

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  9. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    “There is a time to fast and a time to feast. There is a time to break down and a time to build up. Knowing the time, and acting accordingly, makes all the difference.”

    Very well said. Loved this introspective and insightful haibun! 🙂

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  10. Violet Lentz Avatar

    very powerfully put together. You created an excellent piece out of the many contributing components. I really enjoyed this

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Glad you liked it, Violet! Thank you 🙏 😀

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  11. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Love this especially; “nightingale song the deep cold before the coming warmth.” ❤️

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! 😀

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  12. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    Thoughtful prose and beautiful haiku!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you 🙏 😀

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  13. lynn__ Avatar

    I appreciate this Ash Wednesday meditation, Frank…so fitting.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Glad you liked it Lynn! Thanks 🙏 😀

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  14. robtkistner Avatar

    Really enjoyed the triple haibun Frank, and the three haiku were excellnt!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Rob! 😀 I’m glad you like it!

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  15. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice sound in this phrase: “embrace the excess that precedes the abstinance”

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  16. Susie Clevenger (@wingsobutterfly) Avatar

    Oh I love these.. writing a path to spring

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  17. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    This is a seasonal delight. Great capture of holidays and beliefs. I like the philosophical elements, too. ❤

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  18. […] Metanoia #HaibunMardi Gras arrives again. The revelers gather to embrace the excess that precedes the abstinence. There is a time to feast and a time to fast. But there are no parades for us: no thrown beads, no expositions, no chanting crowds of tourists. Our celebration is a simple fried chicken filete dinner with broccoli rabe and polenta.nightingale songthe deep cold beforethe coming warmthThe revels end at midnight. Ash Wednesday then inaugurates another Lent, a liturgical season of reflection and retreat. There is a time to break down and a time to build up. The practice of letting go allows the mind to think clearly, and the heart to feel deeply. The practice of living simply lets others simply live. Our small sacrifices of comfort allow us time to serve others in their need. Our investing time in prayer and meditation draws us closer to our God who is Love.morning sparrowthe first light of anotherlengthening dayThere is a time to fast and a time to feast. There is a time to break down and a time to build up. Knowing the time, and acting accordingly, makes all the difference.alwaysanother journeynew hopeFrank J. Tassone […]

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! 😀

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  19. Vashti Q Avatar

    Wonderfully done. Love it.

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