Crossing the Bridge: a #TankaProse

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Dawn

and the threshold awaits

that crossing

all the preparation

and still the fear

The bridge awaits. The River, so placid today, indifferently reflects the rising arc of the joined stones. I shudder before the threshold. The bystanders at my back stand their ground. This is my journey, to commence with my first step upon the stones.

What will I find on the other side? What will any of us? The bridge awaits, but I can wait no more.

The first step falls.

still morning air

another slice of life

to devour

crossing the ultimate

threshold, at last

for Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 131ย #SynonymsOnly

and Poets’ United’s Midweek Motif ~ Bridge (posted by Sumana Roy)

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20 responses to “Crossing the Bridge: a #TankaProse”

  1. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    Beautifully written, Frank. This form suits the message in the poem so well.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sherry! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  2. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    Oh this is utterly stunning! โค๏ธ I guess it all comes down to a leap of faith in the end ๐Ÿ™‚ May we be courageous enough to cross the bridge .. and embrace all that awaits on the other side. โค๏ธ

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sanaa! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. oldegg Avatar

    I think this is a sort of bridge we’d be happy to cross as children but think twice about (maybe three times!) as an adult and never at my age! I can remember crossing a very wobbly suspension bridge a few years ago in my 70’s…I think that was my last daring deed! Beautifully written Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Robin! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  4. ellaedge Avatar
    ellaedge

    I, too love your form and the trepidation you shared as we question our path!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜€

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  5. Sumana Roy Avatar

    ” This is my journey,” So very true. Crossing over towards the unknown definitely needs much courage. Nice.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  6. Marja Avatar

    Gorgeous poem and new bridges are daring but growth is guaranteed

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  7. susanstoo Avatar

    Isn’t it an odd symmetry that the same image of the bridge works for more life and for death? I tremble before that step, waiting no more.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      So true! Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    A leap in faith, for sure! I got goosebumps when I read your words. Excellent! โค

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. magicalmysticalteacher Avatar
    magicalmysticalteacher

    A bridge that beckons and can’t be ignored—I like that image!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  10. memadtwo Avatar

    I like the immediacy of this, and what a wonderful photo! (K)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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