Contrasting Positions: My latest .@ImageCurve #haibun

man on stairs

My steps up the blacktop walkway from the lower parking lot sound louder and louder. The off-white, windowed, one-story hallway ahead grows. My heart beats faster with each step. A knot in my throat, like an invisible hand choking me, tightens. By the time I reach the door, I have breathed so many short breaths that I wonder why I don’t pass out.

no blue skies
over TZHS
another dread day

The front steps from the double-width sidewalk ascend like the stairs of an ancient Greco-Roman temple. The wrought-iron door groans as I pull it from its doorway. I slip past the metal detectors, ascend the spiral staircase to the second floor. Then, I enter the Special Education prep room and lounge. Linda S, already there, laughs so loudly, even first thing in the morning.

thunderheads
over Columbus High School
just another day

first published in Image Curve, September 5, 2019

for dVerse Poets Pub’s OLN #250 (pubtended by Grace)

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6 responses to “Contrasting Positions: My latest .@ImageCurve #haibun”

  1. memadtwo Avatar

    I remember school days like that. (K)

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  2. Grace Avatar

    Just another day – may it be a good school year!

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  3. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like the details in your description of the high school building, back stairs, heavy door and even spiral staircase. They contrast well with the laughter of the coworker or student.

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  4. Victoria C. Slotto Avatar

    I like the two opposing atmospheres you’ve created in this. Evoked some long ago memories.

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  5. Rob Kistner Avatar
    Rob Kistner

    These two haibuns are both well written and nicely juxtaposed Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Rob! The poem is actually one Haibun in two “stanzas,” but I appreciate your kind feedback! 😀

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