Frank J. Tassone

“sunlit ripples…” a #tanka (5/21/20)

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sunlit ripples

as the current continues

through the bend

all the times I fought

when I could have flowed

#tanka #micropoetry #poetry

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51 responses to ““sunlit ripples…” a #tanka (5/21/20)”

  1. Kim RussellM. Avatar
    Kim RussellM.

    The sunlit ripples shine through your tanka, Frank, and set the tone beautifully. I can think of times when I could have flowed, too. ๐Ÿ™‚

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  2. Jane Dougherty Avatar
    Jane Dougherty

    I admire anyone who can get a tanka right. Good one, Frank ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you, Jane! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Words of wisdom there for sure.

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  4. Nabeela Avatar
    Nabeela

    We have to learn from nature….

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  5. Tranature - quiet moments in nature Avatar
    Tranature – quiet moments in nature

    Beautifully penned Frank and I love the realisation in the last two lines especially ๐Ÿ’œ

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you, Xenia! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  6. rothpoetry Avatar
    rothpoetry

    Wonderful Frank! Seems to be the story of our life!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you, Dwight! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  7. Carol J Forrester Avatar
    Carol J Forrester

    Love those last two lines.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    A tanka for the ages, Frank , so gentle, so true. I, of course wrote two of all three prompt choices.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thanks, Glenn! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. Maggie C Avatar
    Maggie C

    Beautifully conveyed. And boy howdy, I can relate!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. anthonyborderline Avatar
    anthonyborderline

    What life is about in a nutshell, fighting the stream ’till you get to get on with it and see only thing you’re fighting is yourself. Then it’s surf on!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Still learning how to surf! Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  11. Frank Hubeny Avatar
    Frank Hubeny

    I like the contrast between fighting through those times and flowing through them.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thanks, Frank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  12. merrildsmith Avatar
    merrildsmith

    So well done, Frank! It flows effortlessly, but with the twist. And yes–all the times.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thanks, Merril! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  13. memadtwo Avatar
    memadtwo

    I’m sure we all remember those moments. (K)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Indeed! Thanks, K! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  14. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    We all too often fight when we should flow, do we not?! Love this.

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  15. revivedwriter Avatar
    revivedwriter

    The last 2 lines fit with the first 3, while broadening their scope, and I agree with the sentiment.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  16. Truedessa Avatar
    Truedessa

    There is deep wisdom in so few words, sometimes in life we just need to learn to float

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  17. peterfrankiswrites Avatar
    peterfrankiswrites

    Such a clever turn from the outside world to the internal, and even a hint of regret. Concise and insightful. Super stuff.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  18. Suzanne Avatar
    Suzanne

    I really enjoyed your poem. If only we could have those moments when we got it wrong back and flow instead of fight.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      If only. But the river flows on, and so must we. Thank you, Suzanne! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  19. sarahsouthwest Avatar
    sarahsouthwest

    Oh, excellent, Frank. I shall try and hold this with me over the next few days. I’m a bit scrappy at the moment.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      I know that feeling! Thank you, Sarah! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  20. calmkate Avatar
    calmkate

    a wish that strongly resonates!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Indeed. Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  21. The Lonely Recluse Avatar
    The Lonely Recluse

    Sometimes it is better to fight than to follow the flow, although the question then becomes when do we fight, and when do we flow? Thanks for the poem, and hosting

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you for your thoughtful response! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  22. Christine Irving Avatar
    Christine Irving

    My sentiments exactly in an elegant tanka. I think this goes up on the fridge.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you, Christine! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  23. Helen Avatar
    Helen

    OH MY, this is an image that could have been snapped right outside my city, “Bend, Oregon” I love it and your poetry.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you, Helen! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  24. Linda Lee Lyberg Avatar
    Linda Lee Lyberg

    So much wisdom in so few words. Well done Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thank you, Linda! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  25. lynn__ Avatar
    lynn__

    Fabulous, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thanks, Lynn__! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  26. hank77 Avatar
    hank77

    kaykuala

    all the times I fought
    when I could have flowed

    Frustrating lockdown aftermath it is and still not knowing either way when it’s going to be over!

    Hank

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Truth! Thanks, Hank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  27. Mary (tqhousecat) Avatar
    Mary (tqhousecat)

    Such truth here!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Thanks, Mary! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  28. jazzytower Avatar
    jazzytower

    “…times I fought

    when I could have flowed…” Always best spotted in hindsight isn’t it? That’s life.

    Pat

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar
      Frank J. Tassone

      Indeed, it is, Pat. Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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