Course Correction: a #haibun

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Not the way.

Whatever is not the way

soon ends…

Laoxi, from Lao-Tzu: A Book about the Way and the power of the Way, Ursula K. Le Guin

Are we sure?

We have walked this road for a long time. Footstep after footstep across the soft earth of community, and the hard pavement of individualism. Our firm steps have crushed innocent necks along our path of progress. When they cry, all we do is wipe their tears off our boots like morning dew.

Are we sure this is the path we want to follow?

Look behind. Smoke from still-burning communities; remnants of ruined lives; the simplicity of following one’s nature left butchered by seemingly mastered comlexity.

Look ahead: Debris from stricken society, shattered by those starved of Justice for too long. The unchecked spread of pandemic, driven by the selfish ignorant and the failed leaders they chose.

Are we sure?

No?

Then … Change. Our. Way.

enshadowed road

enclosing those hands

different than ours

for Poets and Storytellers United’s Weekly Scribblings #26: Pavement

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17 responses to “Course Correction: a #haibun”

  1. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    Very thought provoking haibun Frank

    Much๐Ÿ’–love

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  2. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    You paint a vivid picture here, Frank! I shudder at the possibility of further bedlam. Love the title, we are in dire need of course correction. Thank you so much for adding your voice to the prompt. ๐Ÿ’

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  3. Kenneth Daniels Avatar

    Subtle but clear.

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  4. Vandana Sharma Avatar
    Vandana Sharma

    Yes, time to ponder for humans, is all this progress worth it!

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  5. oldegg Avatar

    Humans do tend to question everything so the right way is often missed, then backtracking is the embarrassing result.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      If backtracking is even the option here, Robin! Thanks!

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  6. kim881 Avatar

    I love the contrast of the โ€˜soft earth of communityโ€™ and โ€˜the hard pavement of individualismโ€™. Itโ€™s a difficult choice to make and itโ€™s even harder to walk the fine line between them. Once we put our foot on โ€˜path of progressโ€™ there is no going back, no undoing what has been done.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Therefore, we must tread cautiously when we consider the progress that we want to make. Is it worth the price?

      Thanks, Kim!

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar

    How very dystopian! Oh, wait โ€“ it’s just our everyday reality. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Rosemary.

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  8. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    “The unchecked spread of pandemic, driven by the selfish ignorant and the failed leaders they chose.” So true. Those who flocked to beaches and bars have driven the numbers ever higher. We are a generation that’s forgotten the meaning of the word sacrifice for the greater good. Great write, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Beverly! It’s particularly discouraging to see this as a New Yorker. No one learned from what we survived!

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  9. Helen Dehner Avatar

    A haibun for all of time … thank you Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Helen! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Susie Clevenger Avatar
    Susie Clevenger

    You’ve spoken volumes in such an economy of words. So much truth..

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thankyou, Susie.

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  11. purplepeninportland Avatar

    You have said it all eloquently in this haibun, Frank.

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