Hortus Trinitatis

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Lush flora, bathing Eden’s morning air in a delicate aromal song. Dafodils, rhododendrums, a kaleidescope of perennials and annuals: a blissful variety tantalizing sight and smell alike! And yet amidst perfection, an offered temptation to take what is not given. A temptation yielded to, with that all too familiar sense of entitlement, that pride, urging an outstretched hand, “seize!” A shame-filled flight from a primordial garden, lost for all time.

winter frost

the sudden hardness

of the ground

A dry, desolate landscape. The foul stench of burning refuse, sweat and unscented body odor. Raucious taunts and kurt shouts, as a treo of men slowly asfyxiate on Roman-erected crosses. And yet, amidst condemnation, outstretched arms give what cannot be taken. A promise fulfilled, with an all-to-unfamiliar humility, urging those outstretched hands, “give!” A spice-aroma, lovingly wrapped corpse laid in a fresh tomb amidst a new garden, a floral oasis amidst the encroaching, Mediterrenean semi-aridness.

Spring thaw

the returning softness

of the Earth

A fresh garden, with tomatoes, eggplant, romain lettuce; with an abundance of flowers. Soaking in the summer sunlight and frequent rain. Besieged by the opportunistic woodchuck and ever-daring squirrels. How she loves her growing plants; how she rues the rodent incursions! Oh, her heart, open to the give-and-take of life, a survivor of its storms and winters. Ready, as ever, to sow the seeds and nurture the seasonal growth anew.

Summer warmth

the dynamic soil

approaching Fall

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28 responses to “Hortus Trinitatis”

  1. callicarpa Avatar

    How powerful. Iโ€™m especially touched by this:

    โ€œoutstretched arms give what cannot be taken. A promise fulfilled, with an all-too-unfamiliar humility,โ€

    Iโ€™m so impressed by your thoughtful, creative, stirring piece.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  2. Lucy Avatar

    Frank, this is so utterly beautiful. I’m often taken away by your writing, especially with such gorgeous imagery.

    “Raucious taunts and kurt shouts, as a treo of men slowly asfyxiate on Roman-erected crosses.”

    This line is such a vivid one, it sticks out in my mind and I think it’s one of my favorites I’ve read. Period. I also love the first haiku in the series here.

    Ignore that commenter above, nothing in their words is germane to your piece.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Lucy! ๐Ÿ˜€

      I appreciate your affirmation regarding that other commenter. I honestly didnโ€™t see the issue. No matter: itโ€™s that oneโ€™s loss! ๐Ÿ˜†

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  3. Sherry Marr Avatar
    Sherry Marr

    The seasons are best represented in the garden. I loved these different vantage points.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sherry! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  4. rothpoetry Avatar

    I love what your did with this Frank. You have created the Four Seasons of Grace! A beautiful Theological piece carrying us from what is not given to what is freely given! Marvelous work!
    Dwight

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Dwight! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are welcome!

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      2. rothpoetry Avatar

        I trash the comments like the one at the beginning and sometimes even block them. There is no place on the blog for that kind of disparagement! You did a great job, and that is what should be recognized.
        Dwight

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      3. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        Thanks, Dwight! I appreciate your support. ๐Ÿ˜€

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      4. rothpoetry Avatar

        You are welcome Frank! I have had a couple like this.

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  5. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    Enjoyed the ponder through different seasons. Happy Tuesday

    Much๐Ÿ’œlove

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Gillena! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  6. Yvonne Osborne Avatar

    I’m such a sucker for haiku and I love these interspersed throughout your seasons. The middle section is like, *wow* gut punch. Wish I could sit down with you and discuss the poetics of this world.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Yvonne! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. brian miller Avatar

    i read this last night in the ER but for some reason could not comment…

    here is what i will say of detractors such as the previous comment. take it for what it is. look for the grain of their truth they are struggling with, and move on if there is nothing of value to you. I would not waste time defending or arguing.

    As to the poem, I enjoyed it. I like how you used the seasons, and blending in a bit of the biblical and brought out a story of rebirth. There are several layers nicely woven. All creation sings of the creator.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Brian! And thank you for your hard work in co-founding dVerse!

      I appreciate your wisdom regarding that commentor. It was the first negative one I’ve received. Still, readers will construct from writing what they will. My response is more an admonition for such as that one to not personally attack any other person: I often reblog other poets’ work, and I will not accept disparaging comments made about any of those poets personally.

      Thank you, again, for your kind feedback!

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  8. Helen Dehner Avatar

    Three Seasons + Three Haiku = Spectacular!!!!!

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  9. claudia Avatar

    i like how you take us through the seasons here – esp. enjoyed the haikus that you wove in

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  10. Ingrid Avatar

    I love what you’ve done here: through Old and New Testaments straight into a garden of love!

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  11. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love how you weaved the stories of the bible with the gardens we really know… and how maybe the summer of Eden and the frost of Golgata is what gives the soil the strength of its harvest.

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  12. robtkistner Avatar

    Well written Frank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  13. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is exquisitely drawn, Frank! ๐Ÿ’ I especially love; “A fresh garden, with tomatoes, eggplant, romain lettuce; with an abundance of flowers. Soaking in the summer sunlight and frequent rain.” ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sanaa! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  14. Linda Lee Lyberg Avatar

    Frank, I love what you did with the prompt, taking us through the four seasons. Beautiful!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Linda! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  15. Grace Avatar

    I so enjoyed the seasonal offering specially summer. Thanks for joining in.

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