A Fall Foliage Deferred

“Come watch us turn!”

They sing out in wind-carried whispers. Verdant leaves begin shedding their greenery as foliage season arrives.

But the two-paragraph analyses my 11th graders wrote won’t grade themselves. The Eagle Scout workbook my candidate completed won’t review itself, either.

“Come watch us turn!”

The leaves in my former country have surely turned orange-sunburst or autumnal red and yellow by now. I can imagine the multi-hued piles littering the lawn. For now, as the landscapers leafblow the leaf-strewn box yard of my current abode, I smile at the labor I no longer do.

“Come watch us turn!”

But my nephew and his fiancee get married only once. My brother-in-law and sister-in-law, along with her younger son, arrived from Portugal. It’s a week-long celebration, filled with all the familial drama you can expect from a close-knit yet large family.

“Come watch us turn!”

We finally do, heading into the Litchfield hills of Connecticut, and returning home after.

suddenly cold

bumper-to-bumper cars

full of leaf-peepers

I’m hosting Haibun Monday over at dVerse today, where we write about fall foliage or spring blossoms.

The pub is open! Come join us!

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6 responses to “A Fall Foliage Deferred”

  1. pandamoniumcat Avatar

    I love the repetition of “come watch us turn” it weaves in well with the seasonal and life’s twists and turns.

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  2. marialberg Avatar

    “Leaf peepers” made me laugh.

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  3. Truedessa Avatar
    Truedessa

    Ah, The leaf peepers were up north last weekend. A bit disappointing this year in their splendor but, it’s always a nice drive into the mountains. Come watch us they call but, life has other plans.

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    All of those “musts” that prevent us from seeing what is right in front of us, and then ending up in a bumper to bumper collective chaos…

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  5. kim881 Avatar

    I like the personification of the leaves singing in ‘wind-carried whispers’ and the repetition is very effective. I remember, when I was still teaching, being distracted by the colour-show outside my study window. I love the chatty, newsy style of your haibun, Frank, as if it’s from an old friend. I’d not heard of leaf-peepers until this prompt!

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  6. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Somebody should teach all those people blowing leaves about eco-systems. Hope you had a good family reunion 🙂

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