Dragon Dance

I see it all. SSAs, sprawled on the floor, barely breathing. Daniel—a juijitsu master—on one knee, bleeding. Glenda and Cindi, beside the downed SSAs, looking up, terrified. Three intruders, smirking, with bloodstained fists. One clenches Kay’s hair to her skull.

His eyes meet mine. His smirk becomes a grin. He steps toward me, dragging her behind him.

“Let her go, and you can all leave,” I say.

A pause. Then laughter. “Move!” he snaps, his free hand flashing with what is, to him, blinding speed.

I block his sluggish assault. His grin disappears. I flash him my own.

“You should have let me sleep,” I whisper.

He tries again. But I’m a storm of blows he and the others won’t withstand.

Afterward, I offer Kay my hand.

“It’s over.”

‘…city lilacs
release their sweet, wild perfume
then bow down, heavy with rain.’

Kim hosts Prosery, over at dVerse, where we write flash fiction of no more than 144 words. We also use a line of poetry.

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5 responses to “Dragon Dance”

  1. kim881 Avatar

    This is a different approach to the other prosery pieces I’ve been reading, Frank! I like the way you describe the antagonist whose ‘smirk becomes a grin’ and who is then surprised by the ‘storm of blows’. Kay was lucky.

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    To use the given line as a micropoem in a haibun turn it to a perfect metaphor for the martial arts adventure.

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  3. dorahak Avatar

    Enjoyed this so much! Felt as if I were watching an action film, Frank. Fast-paced prose absolutely fits the story and your use of the quote as a haiku, absolutely inspired.

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    I echo Bjorn’s comment.

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