A Gates of Fire Reminiscence

Consider

the contours of

the shield

the one left behind

and for that sin

Spartan trainees

forced to phalanx

an old oak

Later, those Hoplites

would oppose the Persian charge

at Thermopylae

bearing, or born away on

their shields

300

their sacrifice

for Greece

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8 responses to “A Gates of Fire Reminiscence”

  1. Melissa Lemay Avatar

    Ah! Is this solo rengay? Iโ€™m writing rengay with a partner right now. Either way, bravo!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, it’s solo renga! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Melissa Lemay Avatar

        I had to go research the difference. So *renga* has a conclusion. I see now why this is renga.

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  2. msjadeli Avatar

    Frank, I like the way you teach history here.โ€‚

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  3. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    A story told, and important for us all (maybe)

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  4. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    I like the historical retelling in this poem.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Nicole! Steven Pressfield’s “Gates of Fire” is one of my favorites!

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  5. dorahak Avatar

    Well-told, Frank, and a reminder that war has ever been present, though we fight ours not with shields and swords but in a much more quisling way, with drones and rockets from miles away.

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