A horseride

his nostril snort

louder than any I make

with my mouth

A flick of an ear, then a tail

how the flies scatter

& oh,

how he drops his head

to nibble a weed

Only a little skittish

with riders

how his flanks feel

my pressed legs, and

he knows me

& understands that

I know him

with a kick

and a forward flick

of the reins

he gallops across

the open trail

our bodies, at one

swaying up and down

our own tide

a draft in my face

a frantic beating heart

A slight pull back,

a “whoa”and he slows

to canter, then trot

where would our lives be

without horses?

Why would

we ever want

to find out?

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8 responses to “A horseride”

  1. kim881 Avatar

    I love the opening snort, Frank, a great way to introduce a horse! You have captured the essence of horse with the ear and tail flicks, and the weed nibbling, as well as the thrill of the ride.

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  2. merrildsmith Avatar

    I haven’t been on a horse since “pony rides” as a child, but I imagine it is wonderful.

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  3. paeansunplugged Avatar

    Wow! You took us on a fabulous ride on a horseback.

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  4. csquaredetc Avatar

    A superb series of evocative haiku on horseback, Frank! I love how you capture the full range of motion and attachment with such concise lines: it seems counterintuitive, and yet the form works so well.

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  5. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    I do wonder what horses get from their relationship with human riders, do they enjoy the places we take them that they might never have thought to go in such a way at such a speed on such a day?

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  6. seanatbogie Avatar

    Your poem speaks to a strong and close connection to these wonderful animals. You are very fortunate and express it well. I have had very little connection with horses, so I can answer your question at the end. Historically, western civilisation would have possibly been developmentally delayed without horses, but in today’s modern world to have a horse is for most of us a luxury beyond our means that we can live without regardless of how much we might enjoy it.

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  7. dorahak Avatar

    Frank, I’m not sure what happened to my original comment, but it’s not showing up (maybe in the spam folder?!) Just to say again as I revisited it, how much I love your poem.

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