Novel Attention

The tingling sensation on my skin. The deep muscle ache in my upper arms and thighs. The creak in my back. The throb in my left forefoot. The tenitis hum in my ears.

But I smell the aroma of air-fried, sweet-potato fries. I hear Mira’s humming in the kitchen. I see the twilight sky turn dark, and the halfmoon shine through the center window in the sun room. These aching fingers still type.

& I deconstruct the storyteller attempting to regale me, yet again, with tales of my imminent ruin.

autumn night

the faint chirping

of crickets

out of this awareness

a new strength

for dverse OLN #371, pubtended by Sanaa. The Pub is open! Come join us!

Advertisements

Posted

in

,

by

Comments

7 responses to “Novel Attention”

  1. Truedessa Avatar
    Truedessa

    I find hope that out of this awareness there is new strength.

    Liked by 2 people

  2. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is deeply poignant ~ I can visualize the twilight sky turning dark and those sweet-potato fries. ❤️❤️

    Liked by 1 person

  3. lillian Avatar

    For me, I equate this with aging….feeling sometimes the creaking in my bones, the ache in my back as I sit too long typing….and then I’m brought back to the reality of pleasure smelling those sweet potato fries and I feel better. Sometimes, just to take my attention away from the aging process is good. 🙂 And my yes…the autumn of our years.

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    What I see is the author who just cannot stop writing… great one

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Sunra Rainz Avatar

    Beautifully evocative. I like how you guide us into the presentness of the moment with you.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. ren Avatar
    ren

    “these aching fingers still type”– ahhh, aging. when you learn knots aren’t just about tying a piece of string.

    i loved the scene you painted with Mira humming in the kitchen. ❤

    Liked by 1 person

  7. Ain Avatar

    Just at the tipping point you make it back…v nice balance between prose & verse, with the awakening, the rebirth, rejuvenation.

    Liked by 1 person

Leave a reply to lillian Cancel reply

Blogroll


The Wombwell Rainbow
The Wombwell Rainbow
Inspiration, History, Imagination

The Elephant's Trunk
The Elephant's Trunk
🐘 Nancy is a storyteller, music blogger, humorist, quasi poet, curveballer, dreamer 🐘

Gulf Coast Poet
Gulf Coast Poet
gulfcoastpoet.com

A Unique Title For Me
A Unique Title For Me
Hoping to make the world more beautiful

joyful2beeblogs
joyful2beeblogs
Stories about life; past, and present

Colleen Chesebro, Author & Poet
Colleen Chesebro, Author & Poet
Crafting Magic through Prose & Poetry

Mom With a Blog
Mom With a Blog
✝️🙏🏼✨🌸

Annette Rochelle Aben
~ Communicator, WordSmith, Artist, Guide, Mentor, Muse ~

Tanka Tuesday
Tanka Tuesday
Join Us: #TankaTuesday 短歌 火曜日

The Bag Lady
The Secret of Change Is to Focus All of Your Energy, Not on Fighting the Old, But on Building the New – Socrates

Frank J. Tassone-American Haijin by Frank J. Tassone is licensed under CC BY-NC-ND 4.0