Interstellar Last Stand, Part I

A liberated Earth faced a desperate struggle. A faint signal from the Alpha Centauri system offered the only sliver of hope we could expect. So Guardian Command ordered me there.

Little did I realize that voyage would lead me half the galaxy away, and confront me with the impossible choice: Lead my ship on a suicide mission to defend a non-space faring humanoid species from genocide, or abandon them to save our own kind…

How our hands

look alike

across these stars

The Sojourner Truth pierces the wormhole’s event horizon. A spiral of green illumination, like the bioluminescence of ocean dwellers back home, bathes the bridge in an erie light. At the other end of the wormhole’s “tunnel,” the specks of the unidentified armada advance.

One corvette-sized assault cruiser against legions of unknown starcraft? What the hell have I done?

“Cleopatra Johnson,” I mutter, “what have you gotten me into this time?”

battle tension

not the best time to admit

to craziness

“Mam?” Cyrus asks, one eyebrow raised.

“Nothing important, XO,” I answer. Then I order, “Full stop.”

“Aye, full stop,” helm officer O’Brien acknowledges. There’s only one tremor in his right hand as he keys the full-stop sequence. The inertial dampers–a system integrated into the electro-magno-gravitic drive that propels the ship–smooth the deceleration to a nearly unnoticable degree.

The enemy ships continue to advance.

closing gap

the inevitable fury

to follow

“Hail them,” I order.

“Acknowledged,” replies Comm. officer Jenn Larson. After 5 seconds, I look at her. She shakes her head. A bead of sweat lies on her forehead

“Captain, aspect change in the enemy formation,” Tactical officer Nguyen states. Not quite a tremor in his voice, but a sense of urgency I usually don’t get from him.

They’re all scared. I can’t blame them: so am I.

“Visual,” I order, and he makes a throwing gesture. A 100 CM, holographic “Screen” materializes above the helm and tactical stations. The enemy ships along the starboard and port sides of the formation have edged forward and spread out.

An attempt to envelop us—& end this quickly.

shooting stars

so peaceful a night

to die

“So much for negotiation,” Cyrus says.

“Indeed,” I reply, “Red Alert, Battle conditions!” I order.

“Raise shields. Activate PDC and counter-measure systems. Charge primaries, & flood the torp tubes,” Cyrus commands.

The command crew dance their fingers across their consoles. Bridge lights dim, while stations elevate. The “screen” super-imposes over the canopy. Enhancements to the initial enemy signals revert to images of raptor-looking, winged crafts. Ominous red and orange lights appear.

The battle begins.

across

a sea of stars

Earth

(to be continued)

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21 responses to “Interstellar Last Stand, Part I”

  1. rothpoetry Avatar

    A great story haibun collection, Frank. It feels like I am in the middle of an exciting sci-fi movie.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Just what I was going for! Thanks Dwight!

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        :>) You are welcome!

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  2. kim881 Avatar

    Wow! You really went to town on this one, Frank, and it’s only Part 1! I enjoyed the scene setting, the way you set up the problematic situation, and the way the haiku both linked and separated the action in the prose. I especially love this description: “A spiral of green illumination, like the bioluminescence of ocean dwellers back home, bathes the bridge in an eerie light.”

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      1. kim881 Avatar

        You’re welcome, Frank!

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  3. Susan St.Pierre Avatar

    A gripping tale! Woven through it is the familiar human hubris as they seem to claim guardianship of so many “powers” they do not fully understand. 😉

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      That hubris is our species’ tragic flaw, our strength & weakness. But in the case of Cleopatra Johnson and her Sojourner Truth crew, we’ll see the extent to which they serve as true guardians.

      Thanks for reading! 😀

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  4. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Love the tension in this, so much action that it’s more the middle without beginning and end… love it.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      In Media Res is what I was going for. Thanks, Bjorn!

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  5. Frewin55 Avatar
    Frewin55

    Star Trek scriptwriters eat your hearts out! Poets do it with Haibuns…

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      High praise, Paul! Thank you! 😀

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      1. Frewin55 Avatar
        Frewin55

        It’s Andrew, Frank – confusing because Frewin is my middle name and Frewin55 my online handle which I didn’t realise would be what appears here…

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      2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        So sorry, Andrew. Post-work-fatigue brain strikes again.

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  6. Helen Avatar
    Helen

    Your sci-fi haibun is fascinating! As I read and read and read, I realized I did not want it to end. To Be Continued a bonus.

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  7. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    ti be continued! Wow! This is awesome Frank

    “There’s only one tremor in his right hand as he keys the full-stop sequence”

    much♡love

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks so much, Gillena!

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  8. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    A thrilling and engaging story, Frank. The haikus offer an interesting reflection on what’s going on. The haibun form works really well here.

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  9. writingpresence Avatar

    You have taken me to thee edge of my scream, Frank.

    Controlled chaos , frozen in suffocating suspension until the next time

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  10. pvcann Avatar

    This was gripping Frank, and damn – I have to wait for the next instalment!

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