White Stag falling

You pursued me day and night. With every closing footstep of yours, I fled.

Deeper and deeper through encroaching oaks and along leg-breaking switchbacks I ran. Your hunter’s steps carried on. The scent of your dank sweat and avaricious torments me. But no matter what lead I gain, you always close in.

Now, the barking of hounds assails me. Were you not enough? Or have rivals joined your chase?

I feel a shudder. Not long now—soon, even my enormous wind will fail. & so soon, it does, as your arrow finds its mark. A piercing pain, an ever-brief agony, as I collapse. Another white stag, taken.

But before I fade to black, what is it I experience? An offered prayer? Cold steel to my chest? an indigo ink applied around my piercings?

Oh, Hunter, what does this mean?

You drew stars around my scars

Bjorn hosts Prosery, over at dVerse, where we write 144 word flash-fiction using a chosen lyric of poetry. This time, we write to Taylor Swift’s line, “You drew stars around my scars,” from “Cardigan” off of her Folklore album.

The pub is open! Come join us!

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7 responses to “White Stag falling”

  1. Gillena Cox Avatar
    Gillena Cox

    poignant and riviting

    much♡love

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Gillena! 😀

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  2. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Oh I love how you used the line as the haiku of your haibun… it worked so well with the prose that could even be a metaphor for a toxic relationship.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Bjorn! 😀

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  3. Truedessa Avatar
    Truedessa

    An intense piece of prose. The adrenaline rush is felt with each line. An offered prayer (the final shot) to ease the suffering. Sigh…wiping a tear

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  4. writingpresence Avatar

    O you really took this to the h(e)art of the white deer and brought magic to his dying breathlessness. A luminous chase, and a whispering awe at the (skilful) kill…

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  5. Nicole Horlings Avatar

    Excellently written Frank – the adrenaline rush of the paragraphs, and the slowness in the lingering line used as a haiku contrast each other well.

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