The Patience of Water: a #writephoto #haibun

Watch the ripples. Then wait for the water to still. See the clear reflection of the white birch growing over from the far shore. See the green of the surrounding canopy in that liquid mirror. Let that stillness become your own.

The neighbor walked his golden retriever along the edge of the front yard. The dog relieved himself, and that neighbor moved on without removing the excrement. A breach of law and good manners, to be sure, but also a free fertilizing of soil in which daffodils grow.

All it takes to perceive is a still mind.

swimming catfish

stirring on the water

fresh ripples

for Sue Vincent’s Thursday photo prompt: Tranquil #writephoto

and Poets United Midweek Motif ~ Neighbors (posted by Sumana)

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23 responses to “The Patience of Water: a #writephoto #haibun”

  1. Sue Vincent Avatar

    I love the juxtaposition of the stillness of nature with the mundane… and the bringing of that back to nature too.

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  2. Myrna Avatar

    I like the fact that you tied the idea of a still mind as being able to overlook and actually see the positive of a dog relieving himself on such beauty as well as the human’s inconsiderate disregard. I like your photo, the peaceful setting.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Myrna. The photo isn’t mine; it’s Sue Vincent’s–part of her weekly #writephoto challenge.

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  3. susanstoo Avatar

    Sublime and profane/mundane–yes, it takes a calm state of mind to balance and turn back to the ripples.

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  4. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    Bad manners indeed, and a wise perspective that can find the positives in it……..what a beautiful photograph…….is that your yard, Frank?

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  5. oldegg Avatar

    Dogs, water, trees and me illustrate what so much of my life was like as a younster and young adult. Luckily my wife was also inclined that way as well which was a good basis for a happy marriage, especially with the kids thrown in too.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Patience is the spiritual and relational lubricant that smoothes our way. Thanks! 😀

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  6. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    A delightful haibun, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Roberta! 😀

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  7. Sumana Roy Avatar

    A wonderful state of mind that’s watching everything so intensely and nothing disturbs though there are enough elements to provoke the mind. Beautiful.

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  8. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    You need a very calm mind to see the good in dog poo. I hope it composted before someone trod in it 🙂 Lovely tranquil haiku.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Fortunately, we all rarely walk along that part of the yard! 😆 Thanks, Jane! 😀

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        Pleased to hear it 🙂

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sue! 😀

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  9. Cressida de Nova Avatar

    LOL…you are a very tolerant person writing poems about dog’s poo on your daffodils.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      😆 thankfully, the dog incident happened during Autumn. Otherwise, I may not have been so tolerant. 😆

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  10. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    This is such an inspiring haibun, Frank! ❤️❤️

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  11. memadtwo Avatar

    We can’t really leave the world behind…(K)

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  12. Vivian Zems Avatar

    A rather vivid haibun…I love the scenery of ‘life in motion’ as it were.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Vivian! 🙂

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