Lupine Ultimatum: a #tankaprose

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She is a howling in the wilderness we can never see

-from The Memory Palace, by Mira Bartók

A mere howl away.

That’s as far as the family has roamed. That’s all I need do, and their answer will guide me to them.

Why don’t I?

I am the Alpha, father to my cubs, mate of my mate. We hunt our range with pride. Should our prey catch even a glimpse of my black fur, they would flee. But a far more dangerous predator hunts me!

Twilight comes. I can’t shake him. I dare not lead him to my family, or them to him.

But my mate betrays me without knowing it. Her howl peels across the distance between us. My predator stops, tilts his head. He will not abandon his pursuit now.

A mere howl away. I do not answer, even when a lone tear swells in my eye. My mate and cubs will never know how desperately I yearned to reply. But I have one chance to save them.

When twilight fades, I must strike.

nightfall

a single crack of thunder

as the sky turns black

last breaths as another

lonely howl goes unanswered

for Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 152, #Poet’sChoice

With Real Toads’ Wordy Monday with Wild Woman: The Wolf Mother (imagined by Sherry)

dVerse Poets’ dVerse Poetics: On Shades of Black (pubtended by Anmol (HA))

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25 responses to “Lupine Ultimatum: a #tankaprose”

  1. msjadeli Avatar

    Heartbreaking, Frank. Even in the animal kingdom we have separated them into “good” and “bad”, usually by attributes involving how we can benefit from them or not 😦

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. We are the deadliest predator on the planet. Thanks, Jade! 🙂

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        You’re welcome.

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  2. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice last two lines.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Frank! 😀

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  3. kanzensakura Avatar

    Wolves are vilified. It is a sad world we live in.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Yes, they are. And yet, who vilifies them save the apex predator of the planet.

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  4. rivrvlogr Avatar

    A well told tale of the desperation of survival, Frank.

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  5. Sherry Marr Avatar
    Sherry Marr

    Oh this one breaks my heart. It reminds me of the story of a wolf whose mate was caught in a trap – he stayed nearby and even brought her food until she died. There was a mournful howl then too. Yes, a far more dangerous hunter is man. Sigh. You took me right there, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Sherry! 😀

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  6. sarahsouthwest Avatar

    Very intense piece, Frank.

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  7. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    You have narrated quite a story about that lonely howl — it’s such an urgent and action-packed scene. Powerful!

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  8. memadtwo Avatar

    Predator is exactly the right word for humans. (K)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you for the reblog! 😀

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  9. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    We are always the top predator… and who can blame a wolf for striking back?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Who, indeed? Who among us would not defend our family? Thanks, Björn! 😀

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  10. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    Drama in the night! Poignant portrayal of family instinct.

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  11. Rob Kistner Avatar
    Rob Kistner

    Tense and exciting Frank — it drew my breath to stillness. Well written!

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  12. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar

    Frank, you have the gift of assuming a persona and sharing the character’s emotions. What a powerful poem. You brought the heart and soul of the wolf alive with your prose. ❤

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! I appreciate your high praise! 😀

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      1. Colleen M. Chesebro Avatar

        You’re a total pro, Frank!

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  13. lillian Avatar

    …that lonely howl in the darkness…..a visceral write.

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