Country/City Contrasts #NPM17 #NaPoWriMo2017 #haibun #dversepoets

A cloudless sky. A chorus of robins and sparrows marking their territory. Still, it’s too cold for Mira to air-dry her hair on the deck. Besides, we won’t have time to lay about at our leisure.

Our great-niece Viviana will be Christened today. We will journey to the heart of Broadway in Yonkers, New York. To Our Lady of Fatima R.C. Church, flanked by store-fronts on a bustling block. It’s the church that Mira’s brothers and sisters enrolled as parishioners after leaving Our Lady of Victory in Mount Vernon. It’s where Sergio received First Eucharist, where we memorialized my in-laws. It’s where Mira’s siblings still attend mass, even though she and three of her brothers and sisters left Yonkers and Mount Vernon behind.

It’s the last church that Mira wants to visit on her day off.

But visit we will, far from our sylvan estate. We’ll trade bird songs for Honda Civic horns. We’ll endure all of the urban hustle of that neighborhood.

All for family.

barking maltese

the cracked blacktop of a

Yonkers parking lot

 

UPDATE 12/5/17: I added a photo of the church, new categories/tags, and linked it to dVerse Poets Pub for Tuesday Poetics 12/5/17

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20 responses to “Country/City Contrasts #NPM17 #NaPoWriMo2017 #haibun #dversepoets”

  1. lillian Avatar

    All for family….indeed. That’s the key, right? Unconditional love and willingness. 🙂 Haiku adds a wonderfully descriptive postscript!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Lillian! I touched it up with some new tags, a ping back and a photo from the church’s website! 🙂

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  2. jillys2016 Avatar

    Nice job! The Haiku is a wonderful contrast in feel.

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  3. Charley Avatar

    Haiku is always more difficult to write in the city. It’s harder to hear the silence that sings. The lead-up gave me the jitters, but then I was a non-Catholic in a Catholic Boy Scout troop — still in Latin long after Vatican… um, 2 I think. Maybe 5. Dunno.

    Did I mention this is a great poem?

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Charley. For what it’s worth, I’ve never heard Latin spoken at any mass (post Vatican II).

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      1. Charley Avatar

        Lucky you. As a young lad, I made it a point of honor to make up my own responses to the liturgy (since I didn’t know what any of it meant and no one was going to teach me). I got my head thumped plenty by an old lady in the pew behind the scouts. I swear she used a thimble!

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  4. Gospel Isosceles Avatar

    The barking Maltese is certainly a contrast to the reverent echoes of a cantor in a vaulted church. (What I heard from your imagery.) But both voices of God.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Amaya!

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  5. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Sometimes doing things for family is the right thing to do even though inconvenient.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed! Thanks, Frank.

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  6. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I love this coming together story, even if it means trading birdsong for a city… so many descriptive elements coming together

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  7. Singledust Avatar

    loved the sentiment that ran through your poem, all for the sake of family.

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  8. Kathy Reed Avatar

    What a cool way to describe the place you will visit, unique in its mixed scenery but beloved blessing!☺️

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  9. Laura Bloomsbury Avatar
    Laura Bloomsbury

    love how the church has so many visits from your family – and the descriptive imagery of bird song vs honda horns

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  10. ladynyo Avatar

    Hi Frank, I loved your devotion to family. I have little and miss this possible devotion. I loved the contrasts and your sacrifices (country bird song for barking cars…) the haiku was lovely, a good contrast.

    Jane (Lady Nyo)

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jane! 😀

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