Way-back Wednesday 8/9/17: …a grandmother the morning after… #haibun #haiku #poetry

The Morning After

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Her cup of Columbian Supremo cools atop of a crumpled copy of the Journal News, spread over the kitchen table like leaves across the lawn. She stands by the kitchen sink, inhales another drag on a half-smoked Marlboro, stares out the window, not seeing the cracked blacktop or the rust on the basketball hoop.

Thereโ€™s no sign of yesterdayโ€™s overcooked prime ribs. No trace of aroma from the baked yams or steamed avocados. No echo of the scream, the slap.

The silence.

Just her, another grandma. With a swollen right cheek.

 

Stained window

Breeze scattering leaves up

Any Maple Street

 

 

Previously published in Image Curve, August 1, 2014

 

Photograph from unsplash.com

 

UPDATE: for dVerse Poets Pub–MTB–January 4, 2018

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26 responses to “Way-back Wednesday 8/9/17: …a grandmother the morning after… #haibun #haiku #poetry”

  1. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Loved that you included a reading.. your pauses works so well to express that gritty scene of an old woman subject to abuse… who is the one hitting, the grand pa, a son or grandson.. so many possibilities to find.. well done.

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  2. jillys2016 Avatar

    Oh, this comes alive with the audio! So much power in the words and in the silences.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jilly! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. kim881 Avatar

    I like the use of alliteration in ‘Her cup of Columbian Supremo cools atop of a crumpled copy of the Journal News, spread over the kitchen table like leaves across the lawn’,gentle sound effects that lead up to: ‘No echo of the scream, the slap. The silence’ and amplify the shock. Nicely done, Frank!

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  4. Charley Avatar

    Oh my gosh, ouch! That packed a punch (pardon the pun). The silences add to the drama.

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  5. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    That was fantastic Frank, and the recording as well!

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  6. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Nice audio version!

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  7. dianadevlinblog Avatar

    Super poem, enhanced by the audio!

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  8. kanzensakura Avatar

    I refuse to have sound on my computer. I enjoy reading in silence. In silence, this was devastating. Well done.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Toni! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. rothpoetry Avatar

    Heavy Frank! Your breaks are great….create a flow that carries on to the end. Abuse is such a difficult thing…ending in screams or in silence as you shared here! Great poem!
    Dwight

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  10. rosross Avatar

    So much said with so few words and great to have a reading. I need to find out how to do that.

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  11. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    This entire poem is about silence. The abused suffer in silence, and no one is ever listening. Very moving poem, Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jane! Unfortunately, abuse thrives in silence.

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      1. Jane Dougherty Avatar

        And that’s how the evil f***kers get away with it.

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      2. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

        Indeed! ๐Ÿ˜ก

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  12. alisonhankinson Avatar

    This was so real. It haunts me. Much love to all out there who suffer or have suffered in silence.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed. Thanks, Alison!

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  13. jazzytower Avatar

    A powerful one, Frank. The moments of silence speak for themself. It also came across really well in the audio version. And that photo is spot on, Nice job!!

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  14. September Morning: A #Haibun for #LaborDay – Frank J. Tassone Avatar

    […] for dVerseย Haibun Monday: Good Morning! (pubtended by Mish). My thanks to Mish for featuring my haibun “The Morning After.” […]

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