Wayback Wednesday 8/16/17: a #Thanksgiving gone wrong…#writephoto #haibun #haiku #poetry

crow

Conflicted Expectations

 We cleared gravy-stained plates and tainted wine glasses. The remains of the turkey could feed the five of us for days.

It was the first year we didn’t host. Mom and Dad invited us downstairs instead. We had arranged to eat dinner with them and then travel to my Sister-in-law’s for dessert. She hosted dinner for the rest of my wife’s family in our place.

As we said goodbye, my father’s sadness showed in his resigned eyes. I carried his face with me long after we left.

“Did we leave too early?” I asked. We had already passed the Spring Valley Toll on the Thruway.

She glared at me. Her silence was answer enough.

I felt only my clenched hands on the wheel as a forgotten song played on a forgotten station.

Thanksgiving Day–

A murder of crows

Takes flight

 

First published in Contemporary Haibun Online, October 2013, Volume 8, Number 3.  Republished in Contemporary Haibun v. 14, Red Moon Press

 

UPDATE: for Sue Vincent’s Thursday Photo Prompt–Crow #writephoto

 

 

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17 responses to “Wayback Wednesday 8/16/17: a #Thanksgiving gone wrong…#writephoto #haibun #haiku #poetry”

  1. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I really felt this.. the pressure and the bad consciousness of how much time to spend with parents and relatives.

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  2. Donna@LivingFromHappiness Avatar

    It is hard to not be conflicted at holidays with so many expecting so much from us….I felt the stab of pain as sometimes I may have left too early…and I regret it but too late. Love the haibun and haiku!

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  3. John Buchanan Avatar

    It’s not until my own children left that I realised just what a child leaving home means to a parent.

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  4. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    The pressures are even greater in our modern world with fractured families and divorces and remarriages, and family members in far-flung places. The “family center” as it used to be fades, sad to say. Your words were touching.

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  5. Sherry Blue Sky Avatar

    You have captured the strained obligatory nature of the holidays, kiddo. Well done.

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  6. Truedessa Avatar

    I can feel the tension and tinge of guilt. Sometimes we feel too thin during the holidays.

    I hope you have a Happy Thanksgiving!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Truedessa!

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  7. ZQ Avatar

    That was excellent, thanks.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      My pleasure. Thank you!

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  8. sanaarizvi Avatar
    sanaarizvi

    My goodness this is potent! You have portrayed the strained obligatory nature of the holidays so well here!

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  9. hypercryptical Avatar
    hypercryptical

    It is difficult to finely tune our holiday obligations. We will upset someone…
    Anna :o]

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Indeed, Anna. Thanks for reading.

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  10. Sue Vincent Avatar

    A powerfully written indictment of expectation, Frank. Thank you.

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