#Throwdown Thursday 11/8/17…my latest is up: Meltdown – #Haibun #poetry .@ImageCurve

Meltdown

 

 

Iโ€™m administering a Level I Vocational Assessment to Ana, when Julian bursts into the room,

He throws something that misses Myru and hits the metal cabinet housing our classโ€™ books and folders. He drops into a worn desk. His fists repeatedly pound the surface, before opening and clasping the back of his head.

Then he howls.

I rush to his side and take a knee. Coax him to breathe. Victor A.–our AP of security–appears just behind him and asks if heโ€™s all right.

I get Julian up and outside. “Weโ€™re good,” I reply to Victor.

We walk a lap around the school, and Julian explains his outburst. Heโ€™s failing Algebra. Heโ€™s terrified of what his mom will say.

He canโ€™t stand it, but he wonโ€™t let it go.

 

afternoon sunlight

in his counselorโ€™s office

rapid eye movement

 

 

Photo by Cel Lisboa on Unsplash

first published in Image Curve, November 9, 2017

 

Update! for dVerse Poets’ Haibun Monday–Compassion, guest-pubtended by Xenia Trans

With Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform~ Running On… , imagined by Pat

 

 

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8 responses to “#Throwdown Thursday 11/8/17…my latest is up: Meltdown – #Haibun #poetry .@ImageCurve”

  1. whippetwisdom Avatar

    Poor Julian! A very moving haibun Frank and I love the warmth in the closing haiku ๐ŸŒž

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  2. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I can imagine being in his position. Hopefully I wouldn’t throw anything.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      LOL! Thanks, Frank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. willow88switches Avatar
    willow88switches

    I really was moved by the Haiku Frank, which says alot – I’m not a big fan of most Haiku – but the Haibun is a great story/intro to the ending – and I was really surprisingly pleased with the line “rapid eye movement” – it was wholly unexpected yet it follows so well with the 2 other lines …. elegant and graceful, with just enough of a mysterious touch – referring to dream state and the blinking – whether of the tears being shed, or perhaps a sudden realization of the surrealism of a moment – as inferred by “afternoon sunlight” …. yes, this is really lovely.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Willow! I appreciate this! ๐Ÿ™‚

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        willow88switches

        my pleasure!

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  4. MarinaSofia Avatar

    Awww, so true, we rush to judge, but it is so hard to be an adolescent and learn to deal with all these pressures.

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