#Tanka Tuesday (1/30/18): Looking Glass Lives–a #tankaprose…#haiku #haibun #poetry

mirror

Photo byย Mike Wilsonย onย Unsplash

 

rippling pond

a long search in vain for

the ties that bind

How much longer will you stare

for the answer that won’t come?

 

More gray than I’d like to admit. Growing crow’s feet. Lines under my blue eyes I don’t see in myself. A sorrow in those eyes, along side a determination to see things through. So, I take the next breath, the next look, and turn toward life.

Always, another step. Another breath.

Until there isn’t.

The mirror doesn’t lie either way.

 

Harvest moon

surprised by joy yet again

when I see your face

For you I treasure, therefore

you are where my heart must lie

 

For dverse–Tuesday Poetics, hosted by Bjorn, and

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge no. 69, and

Kiwinana’s #Weekly Tanka Prompt #Poetry Challenge–82, and

Real Toads’ Tuesday Platform

 

 

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25 responses to “#Tanka Tuesday (1/30/18): Looking Glass Lives–a #tankaprose…#haiku #haibun #poetry”

  1. kiwinana Avatar

    Beautiful, real treasure the joy seen it someones face. enjoy.

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  2. Waltermarks Avatar

    That’s wonderful! The person you are looking at is the best expression of your true self you will ever see

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Mary! Itโ€™s actually one Tanka-prose poem with two Tanka โ€œstanzasโ€

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  3. Rosemary Nissen-Wade Avatar
    Rosemary Nissen-Wade

    Nicely said.

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  4. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Oh – sometimes i much rather look at the moon.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      ๐Ÿ˜† me, too!

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  5. Sanaa Rizvi Avatar

    ‘How much longer will you stare for the answer that wonโ€™t come?’.. this is so poignant!

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  6. Jane Dougherty Avatar

    Lovely tanka sequence, Frank, sweetly poignant.

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  7. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Good point about the mirror not lying at least to the extent is reflects well.

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  8. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Frank, You are writing some amazing poetry, here. Well done!! โค

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Colleen! ๐Ÿ˜€

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Petru! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. Marje @ Kyrosmagica Avatar

    All three are lovely. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  10. Bekkie Sanchez Avatar

    The mirror doesn’t lie but sometimes the heart does.

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