Murmer of a brook: a #quadrille #haibun…#haiku #poetry


Photo by Marc Wieland on Unsplash


Your murmer carries on a whisper of a breeze. I stop to listen, and breathe.



Yield, and be strong.


If I could only do what you say.


rainswelled brook …

the rocks upon which

I again get caught


for dVerse Quadrille Monday #50, DeJackson hosting.



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24 replies »

  1. I normally see ‘murmur’ in a negative connotation, but it’s interesting how you and others with this prompt have turned it into something like a soothing voice of nature. Maybe if you’re completely unattached to the content and can just hear the audible sound, then I can see how murmurs can be like the flow of a brook.

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