An Awaited Turn in the Weather: A #TBT #Haibun featuring my latest from .@ImageCurve

 

Brightening. Darkening. Crabapple leaves viewed through the dining room window alternate between a luminescent emerald in golden light and drab green.

Until the daylight dims to a dull-gray. Thunder rumbles in the distance. The long-predicted storm approaches the bucolic village named “Beautiful Mountain.” Our home.

upside-down leaves
“Phantom of the Opera”
drowns out the robins

Falling rain. Streams batter the crabapple leaves, and leave behind a shimmering film. They rattle the roof, the deck. The block is under a waterfall.

All while we read, write, cook, listen to Josh Groban. Dry and indifferent, save for a muttered “when” and a flurry of words.

slowing rainfall
a lone crow caws among
glistening leaves

 

Photo by Antonino Visalli

 

first published in Image Curve, November 15, 2018

 

 

for dVerse Poets Open Link Night #232 (pubtended by Frank Hubeny)

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13 responses to “An Awaited Turn in the Weather: A #TBT #Haibun featuring my latest from .@ImageCurve”

  1. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like this description of that storm: “The block is under a waterfall.”

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  2. kim881 Avatar

    A vivid description of a rainstorm, Frank and I love the lone crow in the haiku.

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  3. Rob Kistner Avatar
    Rob Kistner

    Like your work Frank, well crafted… 😉

    stalks lie down in fields
    arbors burst with ripened grape
    fall is on the land

    …rob from Image & Verse
    Lost in Azure

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  4. Glenn Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn Buttkus

    I loved this delicious ballad of the rain, and I liked how your haibun had two haiku. I love a haibun, and love to tweak the form as well.

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  5. Grace Avatar

    Love the haibun Frank. You described the scene well…and I am glad to be inside – warm, dry, reading and writing, while the cold winter wind lashes outside. Have a good weekend.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Grace! 😀

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    you have appreciation of the aesthetics of minutiae ❤

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  7. Björn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    I can so much feel the contrast between inside and outside… during November is when the inside of a house matters the most.

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  8. sdtp33 Avatar

    Very atmospheric…I like the music in “lone crow caws” JIM

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  9. Lona Gynt Avatar

    Made me acutely thankful not to be a crow. Really like this!

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  10. D. Avery @shiftnshake Avatar

    Very cool, the inside/outside of it, the vivid descriptions of the storm.

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