A Traveler’s Wisdom: a #quatrain #haibun

“Conspiring with Ravens” by Jacquline Hurlbert

twilight

above the horizon

strawberry moon

I come bearing counsel. Will you hear it? Aye, I’m a traveler, a stranger to you, and a woman, besides. No matter. You can have confidence in what I will tell you. Will you listen?

aflight across the leagues, I see

happenings near and far

to guide your steps upon your path

that lead you toward your star

Yes, it’s a fine thing, to have vision. If you don’t know where you going, how will you know when you get there? Open your eyes, then, and see what there is to see. Not what you want to see, but what is. Because you’ve been stumbling in the dark of your own making too long, haven’t you?

strawberry moon

cast by engulfing clouds

fresh shadows

Now, now, don’t walk away, just yet. Take no offense. You haven’t heard the last of my counsel, have you?

the heights and depths I fly to view

the actions all may take

through insight into what is true

your future can you make

If only life were about the knowing, right? Alas, if we are to truly live, we must act. Or not. And only when we make such choices with our vision in mind can we forge our path with confidence. Not certainty, confidence. Because you’ve blundered about questing for guarantees, have you not?

There, you’ve heard my counsel. Do with it what you like.

fresh shadows

an owl’s flight caught

in moonlight

for COLLEENโ€™S 2019 WEEKLY #TANKA TUESDAY #POETRY CHALLENGE NO. 132ย #SYNONYMSONLY

and dVerse Poets’ Poetry forms: Quatrain (pubtended by Frank Hubeny). I missed Linda Lee Lyberg’s Tuesday Poetics, her dVerse Poets premier, but I couldn’t resist the images she posted. The pub is open! Come join us!

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21 responses to “A Traveler’s Wisdom: a #quatrain #haibun”

  1. revivedwriter Avatar

    I like the distinction between certainty and confidence.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  2. robtkistner Avatar

    This was a full on post. I been haikuโ€™d and quatrainโ€™d. I enjoyed the read Frank.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Rob! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. Bryan Ens Avatar

    Nice mix of haiku and quatrains in your haibun

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  4. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    I like the connection of the quatrains with a prose text like a haiku in a haibun. It is like linking them with a photo or other art work.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Frank! You understand completely! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  5. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    This is a wonderful mix of haiku and quatrains!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Linda! I missed your premier, but I couldnโ€™t forget that image. Consider this my after hours contribution! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. Charmed Chaos Avatar

        Absolutely!๐Ÿ˜Š

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  6. larry trasciatti Avatar

    I really like the strawberry moon~

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you ๐Ÿ˜€

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  7. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    I love your use of the quatrain here, Frank. It’s like a bridge between your prose and Haiku. Proof that we can mix styles and still have spectacular form in our poetry. I love it!

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  8. Mary (tqhousecat) Avatar

    I love this thread of counsel in between the haikus. It all comes down to choices. Not certainty, but confidence…that says a lot!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  9. […] “A Travelerโ€™s Wisdom,” #quatrain #haibun by Frank J. Tassone […]

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks again, Colleen! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  10. Dr. Crystal Grimes Avatar

    Very creatively written, and so true!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  11. memadtwo Avatar

    I like the quatrain as part of the haibun. They sound like riddles. (K)

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