
Blues riff
on a cocktail napkin
a single tear
They want my blue eyes. If they only knew …
clear sky
rustling leaves
summer wind
The talk of a coming “Blue Tsunami…” As if.
all the calm
of the ocean
politics
Traveling these blue ways …
for dVerse Poets’ Quadrille #107 – Blue Monday (pubtended by Kim Russell)
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Love it, Frank. You worked “blue” over and under, and per usual, your form is unique. Got me thinking of the “BlueTsunami” coming in November.
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Very nice set Frank! I can’t wait for the political smog to clear. Seem like Beijing with no Blue sky in sight!
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This is excellent, Frank! I love; “The talk of a coming “Blue Tsunami…” As if. all the calm of the ocean
politics,” .. succinct, clever and crisp 😀
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Wow, Frank, this is a new form to me and I love what you have done here.
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This is lovely. I like the way you hae extended haiku in a new way.
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concise and powerful (re)working of the theme – thanks also for the ‘blue Tsunami’ – (new to me) the world will be watching with breath bated.
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I like how you went small to large with the blue. Lots said here.
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I love the trip from nature and summer winds to blue tsunami and politics….but then again, that just more summer wind, now isn’t it?
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I like your take on the prompt and the poetry form used. Well done.
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I love the photos and the words sequence in meditation. I hope that blue tsunami is coming, to wash away the ocean of dirt.
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Bravo! you blue weaved everday happenings in nature and politics so expertly
Much💙love
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I love the image, so many shades of blue, the shape and form of your quadrille, and the word play and imagery in:
‘Blues riff
on a cocktail napkin
a single tear’.
I also share Grace’s hope that the blue tsunami washes away the ocean of dirt. Let’s see what mayhem Mary Trump’s book releases.
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Interesting form, Frank. I like the first stanza, makes me think of old Hollywood films, then old blue eyes…
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