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24 responses to “La Notte Scorsa”

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   Arcadia Maria

   November 13, 2023

   Lovely poem.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 13, 2023

      Thank you! 😀

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   K.F. Hartless

   November 13, 2023

   I enjoyed the shadow play here. A pensive one.

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   pandamoniumcat

   November 13, 2023

   Brilliant haiku ending.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2023

      Thanks!

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   Truedessa

   November 13, 2023

   That sounds like a lovely last dance before you moved on.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2023

      Indeed, it was! Thanks!

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   dorahak

   November 13, 2023

   So atmospheric, shadows and light in anticipation, and two intertwined in the moonlight — A glistening haibun, Frank.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2023

      Thanks, Dora! 😀

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   erbiage

   November 13, 2023

   Wow frank this is masterful! You really exercised the form to its limit here, and so beautifully.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2023

      Thanks, erbiage! 😀

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   kim881

   November 14, 2023

   I love this image: ‘the Sturgeon Moon shines through the gap between old pines and gnarly maples’. Happy moving day, Frank.

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      Frank J. Tassone

      November 14, 2023

      Thanks, Kim. We actually moved on August 31st. However, It’s common practice to write Haibun in the present tense.

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         kim881

         November 14, 2023

         Well I hope you’ve settled in and are very happy in your new home.

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         Frank J. Tassone

         November 14, 2023

         Indeed, we have, and we are! 😀

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   Björn Rudberg (brudberg)

   November 14, 2023

   I do think that there will be a fresh relationship with the moon in the new place, but is it the same moon?

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   merrildsmith

   November 14, 2023

   I love the trace of memories here, Frank, and the image of the moon shining through the trees.

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    freyathewriter

    November 14, 2023

    Ah, lovely

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    lillian

    November 14, 2023

    I LOVE how this captures the bitter sweetness of moving…dancing in the back yard. And a beautiful use of the word “moon” in this scene.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       November 14, 2023

       Thanks, lillian!

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    memadtwo

    November 14, 2023

    The shadows will always dance. (K)

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    whimsygizmo

    November 14, 2023

    Awww. This is such a lovely slice of time. Beautiful.

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       Frank J. Tassone

       November 14, 2023

       Thanks, De!

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    ben Alexander

    November 19, 2023

    savoring
    the luminescence

    Beautiful, Frank! ❤

    ~David

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