A Moment of Mindful Movement: a #tankaprose

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Bloodshed in three states in a week. Over twenty-nine dead in two cities within twenty-four hours. Three mass-shooters: only one alive and under arrest.

The arguments begin. The ones that insist military-grade weaponry belong with the military versus the ones screaming, “Don’t touch my guns!” A President of the United States that tweets “It’s the media’s fault,” before he addresses the nation to stiffly condemn white nationalism. An address he ends by saying “God Bless Toledo,” an Ohio city over 650 miles away from Dayton.

The strain of this. The to-do lists that creep up, even in the summer. Aching arms from lawn work. That sense of over-vigilance, of waiting for the next round to fall.

Amidst the storm, an island of calm in the backyard. Movement by movement, the yang style long form unfolds. Step by shifting-weighted step, stillness arises. Cicadas sing. The neighbors dog barks, whimpers, barks again. Two wind chime sounds as maple leaves flutter and branches sway.

a small, still voice, deep within, keeps whispering. This time, I may hear it.

I may listen.

declining sun

and while this day passes

a rose bouquet fades

still the water is clear

when it settles at last

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Colleenโ€™s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 139 #Poetโ€™sChoice

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27 responses to “A Moment of Mindful Movement: a #tankaprose”

  1. Glenn A. Buttkus Avatar
    Glenn A. Buttkus

    Incredible, powerful, rife with pathos, and bang on. Since 2002 there have, in USA, 280 mass shootings with 900 people killed, like having the Oklahoma bombing & the Texas tower shootings in the same week.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Horrifying! And the money-driven paralysis in Congress all but guarantees the crisis will continue. ๐Ÿ˜ž thanks for your encouraging feedback, nevertheless!

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  2. rothpoetry Avatar

    Nicely done Frank. Yes… still the water is clear when it settles a the end of the day.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Dwight! It takes effort to let that water settleโ€”the effort of letting be.

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      1. rothpoetry Avatar

        This is a wonderful analogy. So much wisdom in those few words Frank.

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  3. calmkate Avatar

    A true contemplation in every sense … a tribute to the dead, question the madness, note the sounds and settle down ….

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. calmkate Avatar

        my sincere pleasure!

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  4. Charmed Chaos Avatar

    This is stellar Frank. From despair to stillness. I love it.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Linda. Not easy, but worth it!

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  5. rivrvlogr Avatar

    The man’s callousness and ineptitude is on display daily, but witnessing it at a time like this is even more disturbing. A deep breath and appreciation for nature will go a long way in the moment.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      So true! Thank you, Ken! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  6. memadtwo Avatar

    Nature is indeed a refuge. (K)

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  7. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

    It truly is. Thank you, K! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  8. msjadeli Avatar

    Profound taken as a complete work. Precision clockwork where the time means something.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Jade! ๐Ÿ˜€

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      1. msjadeli Avatar

        YW, Frank!

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  9. Elizabeth Avatar

    You have put in words the feeling of many.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you. Iโ€™m sure many of us grieve and tremble at the events of last weekend. Iโ€™m grateful for your kind feedback.

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  10. Grace Avatar

    Powerful message – I join you in listening. We are lucky here in Canada that we don’t have or are allowed to carry guns – only people in uniform. These are scary times.

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  11. Vashti Q Avatar

    Wow. POWERFUL. I was moved. Well done. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Vashti! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  12. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Beautiful, Frank. I would be content to sit by cool clear water for as long as I could.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sara! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  13. Colleen Chesebro Avatar

    Powerful and moving prose, Frank! I too, struggle daily trying to force out the horror of what our world has become. Your Tanka is a meditation on finding the strength to let that horror go and live in a peaceful moment. Wow. This is so very good. โค

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Colleen! I appreciate it! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  14. jazzytower Avatar

    A powerful write Frank. How will it all end!

    Pat R

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