Spirited: A #TankaProse #Quadrille

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Get up.

I can’t.

You can. Get up.

I’m too exhausted. Too defeated.

You breathe. You live. You’re not defeated.

How can I? I fall a thousand times.

Then get up a thousand and one.

Another breath

Somehow, my feet

underneath

I arise

again

for Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 156, #Poet’sChoice

and dVerse Poets Quadrille #93: Spiritedย Poems (pubtended by De Jackson)

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12 responses to “Spirited: A #TankaProse #Quadrille”

  1. BeckiesMentalMess.wordpress.com Avatar

    Boy, oh, boy… Love the message of adversity and strength in this piece. Wonderfully written!

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  2. H.R.R. Gorman Avatar

    I really like how you used the right and left justifications to create a conversation, then melded them together at the end with agreement.

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  3. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Like rising from bed each morning to the daylight.

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  4. msjadeli Avatar

    Uplifting dialogue.

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  5. whimsygizmo Avatar

    So much hope here!

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  6. memadtwo Avatar

    A mantra for living, (k)

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  7. Deborah Avatar

    I agree with Beckie! Really well done Frank! โค

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you, Deborah! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  8. lillian Avatar

    There is nothing wrong with stumbling….it is in the learning to regroup and rise that we flourish.

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  9. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    So much more than the everyday rising… many of us are indeed fighters

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      True! Necessity is the mother of invention. Thanks! ๐Ÿ™‚

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