Predation: a #Quadrille #TankaProse

Photo by Balaji Malliswamy

When did you imagine that the world revolved around you? Did it take a stray strand of rogue gene to prove otherwise?

How utterly predictable of you!

a glimpse of

pitiable reptillian

indifference …

we can only blame ourselves

for the fix that we’re in

for Colleenโ€™s 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 178 #PhotoPrompt

dVerse Poets’ dVerse Poetics: Aboutย Portals (pubtended by Anmol (Alias (HA))

dVerse Poets’ Quadrille #104: Oh, Weโ€™re in a Fix. (pubtended by De Jackson)

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23 responses to “Predation: a #Quadrille #TankaProse”

  1. Helen Avatar
    Helen

    A provocative write and I agree. Stay healthy.

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  2. rothpoetry Avatar

    I believe in our own small minds we all believe we are invincible and that the world really does revolve around us…whether we will own up to it or not! This pandemic many have shaken that a little! Great Poem Frank!

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  3. Liz Gauffreau Avatar

    I also agree that your poem is spot-on.

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  4. whimsygizmo Avatar

    I like this challenging take, Frank. I hope we will take better care of both our world and ourselves, as all of this eventually begins to fade.

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  5. Suzanne Avatar

    Great – it had to be said. ๐Ÿ™‚ I really enjoyed your poem.

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  6. msjadeli Avatar

    I agree with the concept of your poem and how it manifested. Alligators have been revealed as good mothers. As reptiles are other than us in our egocentric indifference to “other” we write them off as worthy of exploitation without a 2nd thought…

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  7. memadtwo Avatar

    So true.(K)

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  8. robertawrites235681907 Avatar

    Very truthful, Frank, and very impactful.

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  9. anmol(alias HA) Avatar

    Such a powerful statement โ€” such occurrences do remind us of our indifference. Well-penned, Frank! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  10. Frank Hubeny Avatar

    Good point that we can only blame ourselves for the fix we are in.

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  11. Victoria Stuart Avatar
    Victoria Stuart

    A glimpse…of indifference is certainly powerful!

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  12. Vashti Q Avatar

    I agree, Frank. We have no one to blame but ourselves. A wonderful poem. ๐Ÿ˜€

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  13. Mish Avatar

    I love how you begin with these bold questions….yes, how dare we?!

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  14. Beverly Crawford Avatar
    Beverly Crawford

    Unfortunately so true.

    Liked by 1 person

  15. judeitakali Avatar

    This is unique, deep and beautifully written

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thank you! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  16. purplepeninportland Avatar

    Aw, and here I thought the world did revolve around me. Good one, Frank!

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    1. Frank J. Tassone Avatar

      Thanks, Sara! ๐Ÿ˜€

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  17. Bjรถrn Rudberg (brudberg) Avatar

    Oh in parts we all have difficulties in seeing the world in any other way… but even if only looked at ourselves we could take better care of the world.

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  18. merrildsmith Avatar

    It’s so true. Nicely done. I agree with Bjรถrn. To some extent, we all do see the world from our own perspective, but we could take better care of it–and of others, too. We’re seeing a great lack of empathy these days–starting at the top.

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  19. Featured Poem Alert: Weekly Poetry Challenge Stars | #PhotoPrompt: Frank Tassone โ€“ Word Craft ~ Prose and Poetry – Frank J. Tassone Avatar

    […] to learn that Colleen Chesebro has selected my tanka-prose Predation as her featured poem of her 2020 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 178 […]

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